For the Record: Lochte/Phelps (R) 1/?

[mgm86]

Title: For the Record
Pairing: Lochte/Phelps, Lochte/Other
Rating: R
Disclaimer: It's all in my bizarre imagination, although I do wish it was real!
Notes: Hugs and Kisses to Kizzy7 and Wonderjessi! You two are the best! This story is intended to be a sequel to Here I Am and Moving Day, although it is not entirely necessary to have read them (you just

Comments

[navy_brat_1972]

Um...wow! Great start! Can't wait for more...Please tell me that Michael kicks Ian's ass! :)

[mgm86]

*grins* I'm so glad you liked this first chapter. I was very nervous entering the Lochte/Thorpe world. I wish I could tell you what happens next, but it would totally ruin the drama! lol

[navy_brat_1972]

UGH! Why not!? I don't care about spoilers! :)

Does MP kick IT's ass? :^D

[mgm86]

LOL! So the truth is... I would tell you if I had written that part by now. I'm still unsure of how it's going to end, but if you guys want it, perhaps I'll write in a smack down scene between the two :-D

[missyousofaar]

FHGGBVH! YOU CAN'T "END" IT THERE. I need morrrreeee, like. . .now? Hee!

[mgm86]

haha! Don't worry, there is much more to come, I'm just waiting for my beta to finish going through the next chapter. I hope you enjoy what's coming!

[missyousofaar]

Yayyyyyyyyyyy!

[hiphopbox]

Another one! This first part was great and I liked the angst. Thorpe, on the other hand was a compete a-hole. Disrupting Michael and Ryan's life - Not cool.

This was my favourite part - He stood in the door way, his face stone-cold with fury. “Don’t fuck with my boyfriend, Ian. Don’t fuck with me. Don’t fuck with anyone I care about.

Can't wait for more ♥

[mgm86]

:-* As always, thank you for your review! I hadn't meant for Ian to be such a jerk, but then I started writing and he just came out that way. lol

More is coming soon, I promise!

[mgm86]

*blushes* It took me a long time to come out of lurkdom and post, so I really appreciate your review!

Poor Ryan is going to need some major loving when this whole thing is over, I just hope Michael will be there to give it to him. If not, I'm sure we would all suffice lol

[rockstarforever]

All I can say to this, is wow. Great job and I can't wait to read more.

[mgm86]

Thank you my dear! I've been working really hard on this next part so I hope you will enjoy what's coming next.