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mgm86

For the Record 3/5

Oct 01, 2008 10:13

~Chapter 3~

** August 3, 2006 **

The room practically sizzled with sexual activity. Deep breathing and soft moans filled the silence of the room as the two young men came off of their respective highs. Ryan turned to face Ian, it was too hot for snuggling this humid night in Gainesville.

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navy_brat_1972 October 1 2008, 18:21:40 UTC

SO HATING THE ANGST!

Bring on the jello and let the ass kicking begin!

Stupid STUID Ian. Ruining what Michael and Ryan have. I could totally beat up his ankles. ;)

Great chapter...can't wait for 4 and a happy ending.

mgm86 October 2 2008, 00:02:04 UTC

hehe don't worry, there's only two more chapters for the angst to continue through! The ass kicking (sans the jello - that will come later I promise!) will commence soon lol

navy_brat_1972 October 2 2008, 00:06:41 UTC

How about we get together and write a small drabble of Ryan and Michael fighting (in fun, of course) in a kiddie pool of watermelon jello with whipped cream? :^D

mgm86 October 2 2008, 00:13:50 UTC

lol I think it is a necessity! I could totally see it being a bet of some sort in the olympic village :-D

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kizzy7 October 1 2008, 20:35:23 UTC

The ANGST!! I love it/ hate it. Luckily, I know what is going to happen. *snickers* I won't tell though. F*cking Ian Thorpe. I always knew there was something about that guy I didn't like! Oh, I friended you. Love you, darlin' ~kizzy

mgm86 October 2 2008, 00:03:46 UTC

ahhhh! *hugs* you finally got a LJ! Ian may be a bad guy in this story, but I like to like of him as a perfect Aussie gent in real life lol

PS: Don't taunt the readers, that's not fair!

grungepuppie October 2 2008, 07:09:16 UTC

oh man i hope i don't strongly dislike ian irl. haha poor guy's gettin nothin but hate vibes thanks to slashies :) well not all hate vibes but you know

navy_brat_1972 October 2 2008, 01:29:21 UTC

YEAH! No fair taunting! :)

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mgm86 October 2 2008, 03:48:22 UTC

*grins* I don't want to reveal too much, but I will tell you that there is a slight altercation in the last chapter. You'll just have to wait until then to read it! lol

grungepuppie October 2 2008, 07:10:40 UTC

is it between ryan and michael ? :O

and ps i am full of :O with your chapters ! lol jsyk

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grungepuppie October 2 2008, 07:06:07 UTC

:O michael walking in on them kissing is priceless... i'm glad ryan/ian don't *love* eachother anymore.... and poor bb mp. can't wait for 4 and 5. woo !

mgm86 October 2 2008, 16:30:05 UTC

The next two chapters should provide more entertainment than angst for you guys!

lol I'm glad to hear you've been full of :O moments, I tried to keep things as suspenseful as possible, but now it's all about the resolution and the love!

aliform October 2 2008, 07:51:31 UTC

Oohhh...:| No :( I really hope Ryan manages to explain to Michael what happened and fixes things up, but I'm sure there will be quite a bit more angst to follow before that happens! This was great reading as usual and I hope you post the next part soon.

mgm86 October 2 2008, 16:32:26 UTC

The next part will be up shortly, as usual just going through it one more time to check for grammar stuff.

I hope the ending will work out well to fulfill all of your hopes for our two boys (I think it does but *shrugs* ya never know :-p)