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mgm86

For the Record: 4/5

Oct 02, 2008 20:34

~ Chapter Four ~

“Get me another one Kimmy, and make it a double…”

“Michael, I really don’t think you need anymore tonight. You’ve been pounding them back like crazy.”

“Psh… you wanna know who’s pounding tonight? My boyfriend and his ex. That’s who’s pounding tonight. Fuckin’ Australians. Who needs that country anyway? I mean seriously… I bet there ( Read more... )

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rockstarforever October 3 2008, 04:59:34 UTC

Thanks for another great chapter! I just want to let you know that this made my night a lot better when I saw there was another chapter. :)

mgm86 October 3 2008, 16:11:09 UTC

aww *hugs* You're welcome my dear. I'm glad to hear that I could brighten up your night a bit.

swimcrush October 3 2008, 05:18:36 UTC

*giggles* I love this! and I hope they can be happy!!! See, you write so well, it seems real!!

mgm86 October 3 2008, 16:12:01 UTC

Wait... you mean it's not real? lol I hope they can be happy too. Only one more chapter until we find out!

aliform October 3 2008, 10:38:22 UTC

The last bit is so sweet and it makes me eagerly anticipate the next part! :) I'm glad Ryan had that heart-to-heart with Debbie. And the first bit with drunk Michael was really amusing, especially with all the comments about Australia :P But I also liked the list he made and how you explored and explained how threatened Michael felt about Ian, in and out of the pool.

mgm86 October 3 2008, 16:15:14 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this chapter! It was actually one of the most difficult for me to write since I had been so concentrated on Ryan and Ian. But it felt good to get everything off of Michael's chest about the situation and to explain a bit why he reacted the way he did.

ivebeenburgled October 3 2008, 20:36:49 UTC

*makes a high pitched whine and flails*

BBS. I WANT TO HUG THEM SO BADLY.

mgm86 October 4 2008, 00:00:18 UTC

lmao! *plugs ears and then calls for an ambulance* the boys are currently accepting hugs, but you better get them in fast b/c th end is near!

miss_warina October 4 2008, 00:37:03 UTC

oooooohhhhhh that chapter was sooooooooo sweet! =D
I just loved Debbie and Ryan's talk =)
I'm kinda sad though... the end is comming... =/
I am totally waiting for the last chapter ^^

mgm86 October 4 2008, 01:52:16 UTC

hehe a cameo from DP is always a must!

I'm a little sad too, but also kind of glad to finally put this story to sleep. Now I can write a whole new sl for these two! lol