Comments | mgm86: Rain (Lochte/Phelps) PG-13

mgm86

Rain (Lochte/Phelps) PG-13

Mar 07, 2009 21:03

Title: Rain
Pairing: Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This only happened in my imagination. I may wish that I owned the characters in my work of fiction or that I made money off of these stories, but alas, I sadly don't.
A/N: This story was inspired by a recent patch of bleak weather, and while I've been cooped up inside I figured ( Read more... )

story: rain

Comments 28

blacksoul89 March 8 2009, 06:12:47 UTC

I love this, but the end almost made me cry! =(

mgm86 March 8 2009, 17:09:05 UTC

awww *hugs* it's okay, I totally did cry when I wrote the end

binaaa87 March 8 2009, 07:13:55 UTC

OMG this was awesome
It makes me cry like a baby

mgm86 March 8 2009, 17:11:07 UTC

Thank you so much!
I'm sure Michael and Ryan would love to make you feel better ;)

swimboys March 8 2009, 07:22:35 UTC

I'm so crying now! This was too sad but so beautiful and funny and sexy!

Great writing!!

mgm86 March 8 2009, 17:15:16 UTC

*hands you my box of tissues* Thank you so much for the wonderful comment my dear.

BTW don't you owe me some fics to beta...?

djb_slasher March 8 2009, 08:44:55 UTC

*wails like baby*

So sad but so beautiful. Great job.

mgm86 March 8 2009, 17:17:00 UTC

Oh no... wailing? lol How about some chocolate and thoughts of happy Phlochte to make you feel better?

agape_eternal March 8 2009, 13:08:20 UTC

This is so sweet and sad and beautiful and just...lovely

mgm86 March 8 2009, 17:19:16 UTC

Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, as always!

agape_eternal March 9 2009, 09:23:08 UTC

welcome ;)