Rain (Lochte/Phelps) PG-13

Mar 07, 2009 21:03


Title:  Rain
Pairing: Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This only happened in my imagination. I may wish that I owned the characters in my work of fiction or that I made money off of these stories, but alas, I sadly don't.
A/N: This story was inspired by a recent patch of bleak weather, and while I've been cooped up inside I figured ( Read more... )

story: rain

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ivebeenburgled March 8 2009, 14:45:04 UTC
LOVE THIS. LOVE YOU.

Just thought I'd add that in. :)

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mgm86 March 8 2009, 17:21:07 UTC
LOVE YOU MORE! I'm just saying... ;)

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wendies March 8 2009, 18:21:34 UTC
OMG! SO BEAUTIFUL! omg..I fucking loved it! The end seriously made me sob(But thats a good thing) That was amazing!! =D

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mgm86 March 8 2009, 21:22:17 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad I could make you sob, in a good way. lol Thinking of Phlochte love always makes me feel better after a good cry :)

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cataroo March 8 2009, 18:38:07 UTC
This was so sweet... so many cute moments-- it's hard to pick a favorite! The part about designer baby-wear cracked me up. Loved it all, and the ending was so sweet and sad. The Phlochte love never dies!

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mgm86 March 8 2009, 21:24:21 UTC
Couldn't you just see these two bickering over baby clothes? Although, I'm pretty sure Michael would be the more practical one irl and Ryan would go crazy with the designer outfits.

Thank you so much for reading and yes, the Plochte love never dies!!!

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choklit_latte March 8 2009, 19:45:32 UTC
That was lovely and sweet and funny and OMG the end had me in tears. Simply beautiful.

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mgm86 March 8 2009, 21:26:23 UTC
*snuggles* It had me in tears too! I'm so glad you liked the story, hopefully more will be coming soon ;)

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lenaorgana March 8 2009, 21:49:57 UTC
I so agree that rain can connote so much more than sorrowful, depressed emotions. And this fic is so wonderful and beautiful. <3

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mgm86 March 9 2009, 02:02:57 UTC
Thank you so much for the review! After growing up in the Southern California desert, I completely appreciate the beauty and the hope rain can evoke. Even after living in Oregon, I could never get sick of listening to the rain against my window or the smell after a warm summer rain!

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