Here I Am Lochte/Phelps (R) 1/3

Sep 17, 2008 15:59

Title: Here I Am
Pairings: Lochte/Phelps
Rating: R for use of the F-bomb
Disclaimer: Although I may wish it was real, it's not!
Notes: Thank you so much to my dear friends Kizzy7 and Wonderjessi for all of your support and giving me the courage to post my first fan fic ever! To those reading: please be gentle!

Here I Am 
~ Chapter 1 ~

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dragondie September 18 2008, 03:13:06 UTC
Lovely beginning!

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mgm86 September 18 2008, 03:17:29 UTC
Thank you my dear, the next two chapters are coming soon!

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cataroo September 18 2008, 03:42:31 UTC
Wow, that was so sweet! I can't wait for the next two parts!

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mgm86 September 18 2008, 03:46:44 UTC
Thank you so much! It's so nice to hear that you like the first chappie. But the sweetness will be going right out the window in the next part ;-)

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agape_eternal September 18 2008, 07:40:38 UTC
This is so sweet. I love it. I can't wait for the other two parts.

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mgm86 September 18 2008, 15:41:18 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope you like what's coming next just as much :-)

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agape_eternal September 18 2008, 22:52:32 UTC
i'm sure I will.

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aliform September 21 2008, 14:09:36 UTC
Ohh, this is so sweet. I loved the exchange with DP and her asking whether Ryan was in love, and I laughed out loud reading, "It may have been the most profound thing Michael had ever heard his friend say". Looking forward to reading the next couple of parts, which I will do now!

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