The last installment

Dec 09, 2009 02:11

Title: High | PART 3
Pairing: Shinji x Orihime
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A really horny Shinji comes to terms with his craving for an orange-haired human.
Warnings/Comments: Graphic sexual dialogue and profanity. This will be a three part one shot.

Climax )

bleach, shinji x orihime, lemons

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calleope December 10 2009, 03:14:49 UTC
I had a craptastic day at work today, and just wanted to come home, order food and hit the internet for something to take my mind off the awful. Someone up there must actually like me, since you'd updated this...
All three chapters, I just loved the way you portrayed Shinji, his voice was just so strong.
You really built up the anticipation, and I was almost worried that somehow it wouldn't be as good as I'd hyped it up in my mind.
I shouldn't have worried. The sex was hot and your writing was tight. It was way better than I had hoped for.

Sooo, thank you for sharing such an excellent story.

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mi_kami December 10 2009, 23:04:21 UTC
oh you're welcome, my pleasure (or um, Shinji's pleasure). i hope you feel better in coming days ;) and i'm so glad you liked the ending. thanks!

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Absolument fantastique. fantasyne December 11 2009, 20:48:40 UTC
It was perfect. I don’t remember I’ve ever read such a hot, incandescent scene... It’s not just the smut, I mean, there’s plenty of talented fanfics authors with a great imagination who write good smut, but the way you present desire, that crescendo... I loved it. And that incredible style of yours, I’m really amazed. Please, I want to read more !
Thank you so much for letting us enjoy your talent... That was great !

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Re: Absolument fantastique. mi_kami December 13 2009, 02:07:40 UTC
you're welcome! i enjoyed writing it a lot and i'll say again shinji is a great character to write! i'm so glad you enjoyed it, and yes, i'm planning to do more one shots for shinji x orihime. i haven't quite got them out of my system yet.

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bayrdsm December 13 2009, 05:25:26 UTC
Wow! You really did a wonderful job with them. I know it's good when it takes two characters that I would never have imagined together and creates beautiful sexual tension! They were hot together ;)

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