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Dec 27, 2010 00:57

( Chloe/Oliver Bruises (ficlet Oliver centric, Chlollie implied) )

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ihearttvsnark December 27 2010, 04:03:46 UTC

Aw, poor Ollie. This is so sad and I can see all of this happening inside his head - him being okay with being tortured because he knew Chloe was safe, his excitement at being released so he could get back to Chloe - and then a slow dsecent into anguish when he found out what she had done. I love how he's ready to fight for her to heal himself. Lovely job. :)

mia805 December 27 2010, 20:19:13 UTC

Thanks for your review. Glad you liked it. I really hope for Chloe and Oliver happiness when the show returns.

nienna87 December 28 2010, 21:53:26 UTC

This was so beautiful. My heart hurts for Ollie in this. I can feel his pain and anguish radiating off the page. I love love love the very last line. Fantastic :D This was very beautiful! Great job!

mia805 December 29 2010, 02:35:37 UTC

Oh blushes. Thanks a lot for your kind words. I really appreciate them.