"Fast"

[miamo81]

I still don’t like this fic 2 and a half months after I wrote it, still couldn’t get the ending I wanted (and the wording is so very…uck throughout).  However, see I posted and this was actually me having a good fic day.  God that's sad.

“Fast”

Fast.

It was funny how one word.  Four little letters had over taken her every thought.

Comments

[grievingmess]

seeing this made my day too =)

Thaaaank you !

[mrsevilpigeon]

I think what I liked best about this was the way you explain Max handing over her motorcycle, her most valuable posession, just to make him smile. :D

Also, the towel... :D

I linked it over at AURLCO so everybody would get the alert, ok?

[miamo81]

Thank you I tried last night to figure out how I was supposed to post there, but I figured since I only saw your name on the front page that you would handle that. :-P

I am so LJ illiterate, it is not even funny. I wanted to make it more AURLCO, but the damn end would just not comply.

[geeky_apple]

It’s just so happy grin-inducing to follow Max around with the ‘Fast‘ stuck in her head, obsessing until she can’t stand it anymore, just going in and demanding an answer and (unlike me) not getting distracted by towel-fluffy, shirtless Logan

[fauxcynic]

How did I miss this when you posted!

This is great -- classic! It felt as if you were writing in sensory images, so you did a great job of communicating how visceral Max's reaction was here -- and oh, from the towel on -- hot hot hot!

Thanks, and sorry to be so late in finding this.

Yummy Logan..

[nattyrocke]

Great visual imagery, so much so that Logan and his glistening chest hairs are stuck in my memory.sigh
Well done and please don't be shy......lol