Fic : S - Takaki x Hikaru

[miaow_2814]

Title: S

Pairing: Takaki x Hikaru (TakaHika?? Hikaki?)

Rating: PG-13

Genre: humor?

Summary: Hikaru is being S. And his prey is Takaki. [I'm so sorry to Hikaru's fans because I make him soooooo sadist... m(_ _)m]

A/N: I was bored!!! I was sick of my exams. Then this idea is popping out. It’s my first time writing Takaki x Hikaru. I’ve never

Comments

[suteii]

OH MY GOD!!! I absolutely loved it... and it's real weird to, because I was watching that actual episode this morning.... weird.

“Yes, I am. And do you know? I love watching Gokusen 3. I like how you were beaten up. I love the blood on your face. I love it when you were lying on the ground helplessly and beaten up. I love that, you know. And I want to try to do that by myself,” Hikaru smirked. I love that part... poor Takaki, he's got it coming!! lol

It was good.. we all know Takaki is secretly M when he's near Hikaru's S.... lol *dirty thoughts*

it was real good...

[miaow_2814]

haha.. what a coincidence~ LOL

AGREE!! Takaki is a real M! He's just in denial~ LOL

Thank you for reading~ :D

[chibilover14]

O______________________O;;;
HIKARU SCARES THE HELL OUT OF ME!!!! *HIDES* I DON'T YOU S PEOPLE!!! *SHOT*

*speechless*

I thought it was going to be slightly dirty. xDDD

[miaow_2814]

Oh, I'm really sorry for making Hikaru like that~ *bows*

I can't!

thanks for reading anyway~ :D

[stevenica]

Aw...although it's never my top choice, I didn't mind Takaki x Hikaru...
However, Hikaru is an M!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yabu said that! In Duet Nov2008 issue!!!!!
You can flip back to that page >< aw...
Your fic is actually cool...it's just the wrong concept. aw~ Hika can be a S in front of some but the sweet little Hikari-chan in Chii's eyes won't ever be this sadist~~~
And your Yuyan~ He's officially a M in front of everybody~! Even for Takachii, Chii will be the S!
So he won't say "I am not M" coz he'll enjoy it XD
I'm sorry to hv complaint so much...
I like your plot & idea of the fic...change another pairing tho XPPP
Aw, in order to compensate ur misleading Hikaru image, will u mind writing a very-M-Hika fic??? And umm, it's impossible for Takaki to be the S...he's a forever M.
So...well, a super S KING YABU (how Hika once addressed him wiv) then? Yabu's the S-king in JUMP anyway~
Thx no matter wt for sharing this~
I love it (ignoring the pairXP) in fact ^U^

[miaow_2814]

Oh, i'm really sorry... it's just i don't know who other else can be S to Takaki~ XD
Takaki is M, yeah, I wrote like that because he's in denial~ XD just like that..
don't worry, I really thank to you! I've said above that correction are appreciated, right? XDD
very-M-hika? Hmm.... wait.. I don't know if i can think something up... because this fic is just popped up on my mind... I'll think another plot...
Yabu? a S king? XD
I've never thought about it~ XDD
Mmm, let see... if i write do something about it~
XDD

again, thanks for your opinion and thanks for reading~ XDD

[nenemaru_18]

ehhhhhhhhhh~????????!!!!!!!!

HIKARUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *trying to hit him hard at the face mode*

TAKAKI???????????????? *can't stop worrying about him mode*

[miaow_2814]

Ah~ Sorry for this~ T.T

I don't know what got into me when I wrote this~ XD

Thanks for reading anyway~ :D

oh, and sorry about your Takaki's pics request.. I still don't know how to send it to you~ XDD I'll manage something about it~

[aida_pi]

uwaaaahhhh
pity our pretty takaki,got baeten up
lol
evil hika...
just imagine his face on oni,it would be suitable
or else,cant imagine hika being S.. lol

[miaow_2814]

i don't know why I wrote this in the first place...
seriously....

Thanks for reading it!

[aida_pi]

dont be!!
bcz its nice 1!!
lol