Fic : Pet - Takachii (Chapter 4)

[miaow_2814]

Title: Pet

Pairing: TakaChi

Genre: Romance, Humor

Rating: PG
Summary: Takaki finds an annoying pet who wants to live in his apartment.
A/N: Is it a little bit late? I'm sorry, although I have lots of free time now, but I can't get my lazy ass to write it sometimes.. LOL
It's unbeta-ed. Lots of grammar errors are here. But I really appreciate if

Comments

[maplarojcan]

kyaaaaa this is too sweet yo. XD i felt so mushy afterwards. XD

but still, the mush couldn't detract me that yuo still need to improve your english. XD you should ask help from a beta-reader ne? XD someone who can help you learn. XD

waaiii but this is still SO cute, makes me want to bite them BOTH. WAHAHAHA. :)

T__T i fear what's coming next~

[miaow_2814]

YES INDEED!! I really need beta-reader! T.T

and I still feel bad for not letting you write it... I've asked my friends and most of them said no... so, I'm sorry~ m(_ _)m
Maybe you could write it better than me...

btw, thank you for reading and commenting!! XDD

[maplarojcan]

tsk! =)) don't worry about it bb. :) it's REALLY not a problem. :) it would've been problem if i wrote it and then i got accosted by people for writing a similar story. :) i wouldn't like that. XD but srsly, :)

aww. this is such a cute story, it would be a shame not to comment. XD and you actually write really well. :) i like the way the story is flowing. it's not rushed, nor is it dragging. :)

and i dont even read unfinished stories. so im threatening you right now. you have to finish this story~ XD hahaha. ayt? XD

maybe you can post it along with your story? that you need a beta-reader...? or if anyone could refer you TO a beta-reader? XD some kind souls might help you. XD might decide to help you i mean. XD

[miaow_2814]

umm... if you sure... I really feel bad in the first place... D:

Really? Whooa... thank you! I don't think I was writing that well actually... >.<

LOL~ I will finish it~ XDD I promise! I can't leave it all behind~

Ah! I'll say that on the next chapter... Maybe it can help. XDD
Thank you!! You've helped me! XDD

[miaow_2814]

XDDD

thanks for reading and commenting! XD

[dazehyde]

CUTEEEEEEEEE!!!
Eventhough I'm a TakaYama lover, but I also LOVE TakaChii *hoho*
Can't wait next chapter ne~
Ganbatte... ^___^

[miaow_2814]

XD
I'll update soon then~ XDD

Thank you for reading and commenting!!

[angelika20]

KYAAAAAAAAAA~ bagus bangeeeeeeeet.
i really really love your fanfic! esp this part! i love takachi so much! i want to be chii
do you make the chap 5? I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO READ THE NEXT CHAP.
<3 lovelyy.

[miaow_2814]

XDD

I will... XD I'll update soon then! XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! XD

[hei_sei]

uwaaaa!! I'm late! I'm late! I'm late!!!! but this fic is always cute!!!
I love you for making this!!! XD

aaaaa Takaki's habit....kiss Chii's forehead...uwaaa.......let me replace Takaki's place! I want to kiss Chii's forehead too XD

uwah....so finally they realize the love...between them! *teary eyes |D
Takaki is soooo cute when he hug Chii all the time~ he's so childish >3
but I like him *lol not as much as I love Chi though *lol again

there's still another chappie right ?! looking forward to read it :3

[miaow_2814]

You're not that late~ XDD

ahahaha.. I wanna replace him too!!!

I really love childish!Takaki~ And Chinen is just to irresistible~ LOL

Yes.. will update soon! XDD
Thank you for reading and commenting!