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[miazilla]

Frustration
By Mia
Rating: G
Characters: Kevin
Summary: Kevin doesn’t know what to do.
Disclaimer: I don’t know these people. This is fiction, not a recount of things that have actually happened.

Comments

[pensnest]

Hi. That's pretty good, you have conveyed the sense of helplessness that Kevin has, and the way the only things he can do don't help to change the situation. The way he wants to turn back time and do things differently, is very true to life. The brief characterisations of the other Boys also work

[miazilla]

^____________^ *tackle glomps you* Someone reviewed!!

You bring up some very good points, about what I could have written. I'm very new at this though and my goal was a complete fic that was 500+ words. It's the longest I have ever written (or rather finished ;) ). But, yeah, it is a bit... shallow in some places because it's so short.

You seem like an exellent plot beta! My beta just betaed spelling and grammar. Which was very necessary :P

*dances around all happy and squeeing* Someone liked it! Yay! And the reviewed! <3333333

[pensnest]

*smiles* I hope you've got the writing bug, then. It's very satisfying to write something you can be pleased with.