[fic] [cw rps] bet on the come

Mar 29, 2007 09:44

This was supposed to be quick, easy motivational porn for balefully. Instead, it turned out to be 6k long and sort of boring and not nearly as porny as I would've liked, sigh. At least I smuggled some Mike/Tom in there, which always makes me happy. The rest of it, not so much. but I'm sick of looking at it, so posting before I change my mind. (Is this a ( Read more... )

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balefully March 29 2007, 15:15:30 UTC
Oh my god. OH MY GOD.

I just. I am like. ROLLING IN THIS, it is so. GOD. I'm sure I've said it before but your style is ridiculously rich and layered and it's like they're fucking REAL. Which makes the porn THAT MUCH HOTTER. AOFIGNSOIhnspdihSG.

I do not know what is WRONG with you == boring? WHAT? You are. On crack. And Mike and Tom are funny and perfect, and Chad is hilarious, and. You. Win me. <3!

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micawbish April 7 2007, 17:28:04 UTC
dude, i'm just glad you didn't hate it! i don't know what happened. i think it's that i have an attention span of a GNAT, so the longer it inexplicably got, the more desperate i was to see it finished. (yes, this was over a two-day span, i get distracted EASILY ok. :p) i'm sad it didn't turn out all randomly porny like i wanted, but NEXT time, for sure. and i suppose if the porn ever gets away from me, i can suck it in and hash it out with a beta so i don't post something so rough. :/ ...maybe.

but aw you are the sweetest ever! i wish i could say the same for myself, but we all know this was a mercenary gesture. :D?

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balefully April 7 2007, 17:46:30 UTC
I am having the same issue with Runway!Sam, where it is getting inexplicably longer and longer and I just want to FINISH IT. Not that I do not love it; I do. I just want to OISosidngosinh HAVE IT POSTED and not have to worry about it anymore, because I keep having more ideas and more to write and it is going to be, like. And eight-novel series at this rate.

Which is bad, because then I could never write Bunnyranch!Jensen, which. Well, besides your BRILLIANCE being the motivation for it, I have also been on an insane hooker!AU tear for the past few days, even moreso than normal. And many of the hookerfics I am reading are. Um. Not exactly. Literary achievements. If you namsayin'. :\ So I feel there is a niche that needs filling, that I want to fill, but I have SO MUCH OTHER STUFF TO DO/WRITE. And I am just SO SLOW.

*rambles*

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micawbish April 7 2007, 18:22:52 UTC
ahahaha, you are the CUTEST. nobly filling the hookerfic niche! and ooh, i'm curious as to what exactly you're wanting to see that you haven't yet already? i definitely know what you mean though. there's this one fic i've been reading lately in particular. i want to like it so bad, it's all porny and long, but it kind of makes me want to scratch my eyes out instead.

YOU DO. the list of things i am waiting from you is ENDLESS. the wait is interminable! :'(

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kliqzangel March 30 2007, 02:09:39 UTC
Seriously I love AU's. This? No different.

Jen and Jay seem to be perfect no matter what they are.

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micawbish April 7 2007, 17:29:26 UTC
aren't they? and believe me, i am dying to see them in each and every alternate scenario i can think of.

thanks for reading!

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timdvosk March 30 2007, 02:12:11 UTC
Can you like totally, come and give me CPR, cause I think I've died. I loved this tell me your gonna continue.

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micawbish April 7 2007, 17:30:16 UTC
oh wow! i'm so glad you liked it. not sure what else there is to say with this though?

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elmo_loves_me March 30 2007, 02:28:12 UTC
God, I don't even understand the first part of this fic (where did you learn all the lingo? *impressed*) and yet it is still so good. I really enjoy AUs, and the characters in this were so rich and well rounded that it made them completely plausible and just tipped me over the edge to loving this.

*adores*

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micawbish April 7 2007, 17:33:27 UTC
oh man, thanks so much! i'm really pleased you liked this. and hah, a lot of my friends gamble and a few of them are bookies, so i've had to hear my share of this stuff. the rest i double checked with the net. there was a lot more stuff i wanted to put in, but it was starting to get technical. :p

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unperfectwolf March 30 2007, 04:39:48 UTC
Mica *whines* this is fucking fantastic. OMG I LOVE YOU. And your aus. And just, YES.

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micawbish April 7 2007, 17:35:18 UTC
aww, thanks dude. you know how much that sentiment is returned. <3 and i totally love YOUR aus, if i've been remiss in telling you. usually when i beta, i tend to focus on what could use work and forget to tell you how generally awesome i think it is.

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unperfectwolf April 8 2007, 02:12:26 UTC
*hugs* awww, thanks.

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