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michaelamd23

Evolution of Love (Experimental Title.)

Apr 28, 2009 23:03

So.. I made a fic instead of doing an essay the other night... And im now posting it.. Thanks to my friend Alyssandra for Beta-ing....

The title isnt Finite... i dont know if i like it yet...

Title: Evolution of Love (Experimental Title)
Show: Chuck
Characters/Ship: Chuck/Sarah, Chuck, Sarah, Bryce, Cole
Chapters: 1
By: moi!
Summary: Sarah's POV on her ( Read more... )

Comments 21

blackberry06 April 29 2009, 04:27:25 UTC

Oh my god Mick!!! *hugs you*

That was so wonderful! You really got into Sarah's mind, which is awesome because we don't usually get to see what she's really thinking beyond Yvonne's eyes and expressions. But this was so funny and sweet and heartbreaking!

WONDERFUL job!

PS....I need a Chuck icon clearly

michaelamd23 April 29 2009, 04:30:38 UTC

THANKS! *hugs back*

and yes... thou needseth un chuck avatar-io

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michaelamd23 April 29 2009, 05:45:20 UTC

Have I ever told you that I love you?

Well i just have!

Thank you so much!

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michaelamd23 April 29 2009, 06:03:10 UTC

Am i allowed to ask for more?

Thread 10

rinslet April 29 2009, 06:19:15 UTC

I'm using my awesomest icon of my awesome (but now deceased *CRY*) favorite character.

Anyway. I love how you went through the progression of their relationships form Sarah's POV. Especially all those key moments in their relationship. I also like how she is now using Chuck as a measuring stick to men she has met before and after.

Great read. :D

michaelamd23 April 29 2009, 06:21:48 UTC

THANKS!
Too bad i cant see the av right now because parental controls are being a bitch...

michaelamd23 April 29 2009, 06:28:47 UTC

OOH! Now i can! ITS ADORABLE! hez all smiley...

michaelamd23 April 29 2009, 06:30:17 UTC

But i dont think hes gunna die completely....

Thread 8

savepudsy April 29 2009, 14:01:26 UTC

3. Actually fixing her lipstick.
"warm for her form"

HAHAHHAHA pure quality.

michaelamd23 April 30 2009, 00:19:25 UTC

I credit "Warm for her form" To Meg Cabot... thats where i learned it from. Thanks for laughing!

dragonflylady77 November 11 2009, 11:14:26 UTC

Funny how every kiss eclipses the next... The one they had for Roan Montgomery was HOT.

Is it wrong that she was slightly turned on at the sight of him doing kung fu? Way I see it? It would be wrong *not* to!!!

*happy sigh*

Due to Chuck’s kisses, Bryce had gone down from 8.5 to a solid 5, mediocre. Chuck was a perfect 10, possibly a 31 LOL Chuck FTW!!

Re Bryce vs. death, I don't think we've seen the last of him. After all, Fulcrum brought him back and he'd been shot at close range by Casey!! As for your theory that since his eyes were open he was intersect-ed as well, hadn't thought of that... Hmmm.

michaelamd23 November 11 2009, 16:11:09 UTC

OHH Yay new comment!

On the KungFu... um... I have- under further examination- somewhat changed my stance... I see her face portraying a different emotion. too late to change it now.

On Bryce... Yea... I was thinking it would be too much for his brain to handle... and Fulcrum/ring would now be using him as a flash machine... I have a whole fic in my head of how this works... Im trying to write it. And there is also always flashbacks!

dragonflylady77 November 11 2009, 20:40:02 UTC

Yes? I rewatched the scene last night and this morning read this your comment about it and I don't have the time right now to go watch it again (damn you RL for getting in the way of Chuck love!!). What did you see???

But they were going to upload the intersect in Bryce's brain anyway, weren't they? The thing that made me go 'huh?' was that the other time Chuck upload the intersect (and the update), he fell down on his back, unconscious. This time, with the new, more powerful intersect, he just leant forward on the console looking all sexy in his suit with the hard breathing.

Why am I fixated on the mole on his left hand? And the one on the back of his neck? Huh? Why?

More writing!! Please??

michaelamd23 November 11 2009, 21:48:01 UTC

On my reading of Sarah's face... I see a mixture of fear and amazement. Like... that she is amazed that he is becoming the hero that she always knew he could be... but she was going to quit, and she was going to be with him in his life, so they could be together. Spy world prohibits them from it. And his becoming a spy rips the rug right out from underneath her. She was ready for one world, going to go to it... she was ripped out. (I have a fic on it in the process of being made ( ... )