Alright, let's do a 2nd draft.

[michealthane]

Type your cutDevotion Ideas.


Savage Flying Wedge (Nightmare 3, Resilience 2 Majesty 1)
Draw-  N/A
Cost- 1 WP +2 blood
Duration- Scene
Effect- Combat is a terrifying experience for those unaccustomed.  Even the most stalwart veteran can feel the trademark fluttering stomach and cold chills at the thought of a long life being wasted. Fear is a driving

Comments

[elegbara]

"I got rid of Psychic shield because carthains complained about stealing their cheese. They have their own devotions, they have an invicibility combo in the making, and they have blood sorcery as a covenant that deals with mortal society. Invictus have retainers and heavily nerfed oaths. Yes. We are stealing a lot of cheese. **rolls eyes**"

How is that anywhere near invincibility? Not only that, but half the Carthian goodies aren't even sanctioned for play yet, and the "invincibility combo" you speak of requires the completion of three global plot kits to obtain along with a lot of xp. Your oaths, while nerfed, were originally obscenely broken, and if you look around at some of the unchanged oaths *coughs*bloodloyalty*coughs* you guys still have some nice jank.

As far as memories of pain/psychic assault, i really don't see the need to make it also cost a blood. Really should be just a wp.

[michealthane]

They have the 'I win initiative' Devotion yes?

[elegbara]

Guardian vigil only really helps if you're the one being ambushed.

[michealthane]

Instanteous Transformation. Mistform. Gaurdian Vigil.
GOOD LUCK killing me.