Comments | michechu: [Fanfic] Tease

michechu

[Fanfic] Tease

Feb 07, 2013 14:18

Title: Tease
Author: michechu
Rating: NC-17
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist (could be Brotherhood or 2003 FMA)
Pairing: Elricest

( 3,404 words of nothing but smut. )

Comments 9

slinkslowdown February 7 2013, 19:34:05 UTC

Hoooooooooly Hell, that was amazing.

michechu February 9 2013, 00:54:10 UTC

Thank you. =)

sexkitten426 February 8 2013, 05:35:12 UTC

Smutty & wonderful. I liked Ed's desperation.

michechu February 9 2013, 00:54:37 UTC

Well, I do enjoy torturing Ed. <3

evilchuckles February 8 2013, 13:29:15 UTC

This...this just made me a wibly mass of horny squee. Sooooooo erotic and then the slightly rough sex at the end...fuck.

*adds to memories*

michechu February 9 2013, 00:56:19 UTC

=O I'm glad you liked it enough to add it to your memories! I'll be honest, I was not happy with this fanfic at all when I posted it, so I didn't expect it to go over well...but I must have done something right! Thank you.

evilchuckles February 9 2013, 13:32:49 UTC

I thought it was perfect!

flirtyalphonse February 8 2013, 16:33:58 UTC

This was gooooooood stuff! It was funny in the beginning and just got hotter by the end. Loved it!

michechu February 9 2013, 00:57:46 UTC

Thank you! I honestly didn't mean for it to be so humorous in the beginning, but it just came out that way while I was writing XD I couldn't resist Ed's squelchy shoes.