Why Do I? - a poem by me

[michelle_brandy]

Why do I

Wanna be with

Someone that doesn’t

Wanna be with

Me?

Why do I

Wanna be with

Someone who doesn’t

Love

Me?

Why do I

Wanna be with

Someone who doesn’t

Want

Me?

Why do I

Wanna be with

Someone that doesn’t

Need

Me?

Why do I

Wanna be with

Someone that doesn’t

Want

Me

Too?

Comments

WOW!

[becky_hw]

Michelle! Wow!

I've read this many times now and I just think it’s amazing. Your poem completely sums up my feelings for the last couple of weeks. I’ve been asking myself these questions for a while, and I still haven’t found the answer to them, and I don’t know if I will…

Not quite sure on the background of this poem, or for your reason behind it… but for whatever it is, the emotion that I get from it is simply, somewhat, overbearing (in a good way).

This is beautiful… Absolutely and undeniably beautiful

Re: WOW!

[michelle_brandy]

thanks becky
i dont know of you have read any other of my poems or anything but i write quiet alot about this type of thing because it helps get it out and it helps get out how i am feeling about stuff.
thanks for your comment it means alot

Week the Ninth ~ Comment

[krys_szaf]

michelle_brandy wrote a poem titled, "Why Do I? - A poem by Me", and I felt that considering my mood it would be a create subject for my livejournal comment this week