I will say this, it is very hard to pick what to submit for marking just in the fact that I guess you could say that finding something that you would call your best effort or entry is hard as they are all varied and I like my entries for different reasons!
On that note here are my submissions:
http://michelle-brandy.livejournal.com/66748.html http://
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Before MG goes through your entries us LJAA people do (well he may have gone through already I am not sure... he didn't say when he needs us to have done our part by!)
I really liked your poem, for me there was created a sense of the waves that would be seen as you watched from the cliff face.
Your comment on Hopkins was also insightful, particularly with the connection that you made to todays society.
I know you have been making your comments on other peoples journals but I think these need to be put in with the entries for the week. I think that they are also marked as a part of how you are using LJ.
Loving the poetry and enjoy the break!
Tamara
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