Literature Entry week 6

[michelle_brandy]

i walk down to the ocean
i stare out 
at the great expanse
majestic
overpowering
the waves crashing on the beach
i sit down 
in the wet cold sand
the tide is coming
i sit and i look
at the great expanse
it is calming
it is soothing
it helps
it clears the ever clouded mind
it frees the thoughts
left unsaid
unthough of
unspoken things
if only i said things
that i mean

Comments

[michaelgriffith]

Michelle= nicely shaped poem with no redundant words... well edited and captures your experience. Good work... But where are your post-week 6 entries????? falling a little behind I fear.
MG

Michelleeeeeeeeeeee!!!

[miss_marshy]

I love that poem! I don't live near a beach, but whenever i go on holidays, i'm always going for walks on the sand to clear my head. It's as though as the tide comes in, it washes away not only the sand but takes away my muddled thoughts so then I can think straight. The ocean really is so calming!!!