Kill Shot (30 Rock, Jack/Liz)

[michellek]

Title: Kill Shot
Prompt: 100_situations #036. Gun
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Spoilers: "The Source Awards"
Word Count: 1,043
Rating: PG
Table: Number Two.
Summary: Jack wants to take her to a firing range.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue!

Comments

[bowserbabe]

My typo sense is tingingling!

And that spelling of tingling is too amusing to fix, even as I make fun of your own typing mishaps.

even though he assured he hasn't put bullets in it yet

Edit: Also I totally did the whole Black thing myself the other day, someone was talking about Harry Potter and how a character was a Black, and I was like... wtf? Oh, right. Family name. >.>

[frey_at_last]

My grandma's maiden name was Black, and whenever we talk about that side of the family I kind of forget that to a lot of people "the Blacks" isn't just Janet, Lyman, and so and so. There is, like, "the Black nose" and "the Black profile" hahaha, and I forget this so much that I never associated it with the 30 Rock joke until a few weeks ago, when it randomly occurred to me. /ramble

[michellek]

Why make fun of me!

And perhaps you could count that misspelling as both amusing and charmingly ironic.

I've never had anything like that happen to me, but who knows what tomorrow will bring. Probably not that happening, but still.

[frey_at_last]

Okay, you know how I kind of like your fic. But for whatever reason, these latest three you've posted have been, like, EXTRA AWESOME for me.

This is so sexy in a way they usually aren't, and yet there they are being themselves, and it just works! I love him just barely touching her, and then when he supports her hips. And:

"Lemon."

"Jack."

I love their schtick!

[michellek]

Thank you very much! That's great to hear, especially since I was kind of unsure about this one. Not that I ever bother posting something I think doesn't work at all, but I felt like 'hmm, does enough happen in this?' I did eventually decide yes, but it was a fence-sitting situation.

The hip touching was a last minute addition; I just decided, yeah, he should touch her now.

[mindymakru]

Eheehee! This was fun! I especially like her talking to the gun.

[michellek]

Thank you! :)

[samuraichikx]

I was going to "d'awwwww" at Liz shooting the target through the heart, especially considering where Jack was at the time...until I realized what you probably meant it as xD

BUT STILL!

D'awww =) I love their banter

[michellek]

Ha, yeah, I did mean it as more of a lol than a sweet moment. That being said, I like to think Jack was affected by her ability to shoot a gun so well.

Thank you! :)

[tinafeynatic]

Hehe Jack's gun hehe.

[michellek]

I was going to mention the thing about a gun being a 'metal penis,' but I thought I would leave it to the readers to think of that. ;)

[tinafeynatic]

That's exactly what I thought of... Kinda. xD

[michellek]

ha, is that not what you were thinking? I'm sorry to ascribe dirtiness to your hee-ing.