Twelve Days - December 14 - Jack/Liz

Dec 14, 2010 00:01

Title: Like That Scene in Risky It
Challenge: The Twelve Days of Christmas!
Prompt: 30 Rock, Jack/Liz, Jack and Liz try to have sex on the subway.
For: peoplewantducks
Word Count: 1,305
Rating: NC-17
Summary: See prompt!

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue!

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jack/liz, 30 rock, twelve days of christmas

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foreverislong December 14 2010, 10:35:51 UTC
Touching side-butt is something I worry about to often on public transport.

Maybe now I'll think about this instead, it will be much more pleasant :)

Good job!!

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michellek December 15 2010, 02:21:54 UTC
Thank you!

Touching side butts is one of my concerns, too. Sparsely populated trains/buses are the best.

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samuraichikx December 14 2010, 10:54:25 UTC
First of all. I'm happy to say I had the clairvoyance to know that you would somehow make the last episode into your theme =). I approve!

Secondly, LOVE THIS! I don't know, I feel like I've forgotten how awesome Jack/Liz sexiness is.

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michellek December 15 2010, 03:49:37 UTC
hee, good job predicting! I kind of thought I would change it to this before I watched the episode, since I knew there was going to be a ~look.~ (Why doesn't he look at Avery this adorably? Or perhaps I just miss it because I'm paying less and less attention to Avery. I will admit this is possible.)

Thank you! Obviously there has to be a lot more porn so you never forget again. ;)

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parisgal3 December 14 2010, 16:31:16 UTC
"Risky It"

Love it!

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michellek December 15 2010, 03:50:41 UTC
ha, thank you! I was kind of excited when I realized/remembered there was a subway sex scene in Risky Business so I could mention 'Risky It' in the title. :)

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lavenderseaslug December 14 2010, 18:13:55 UTC
Hnnngghhh. Okay, this was great. I love that Liz is trying to be adventurous but still doesn't let go of her neuroses (although I'm not entirely sure if not wanting to touch the floor of a subway car is neurotic or just common sense)

And I liked her failed attempts at giving Jack hints. That was aces. And "zero to horny" should be a t-shirt. Man oh man. This was great.

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michellek December 15 2010, 03:53:26 UTC
Thank you! (I think it's common sense, probably. I know I wouldn't want to do so... but then again, I am kind of neurotic.)

:D I amused myself with 'zero to horny.' And I bet Jack probably does go from zero to horny pretty quickly.

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lz1982 December 15 2010, 01:35:42 UTC
Subway sex, what a great idea! In fic, not in life. I loved Jack paying the guys off so they'd leave.

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michellek December 15 2010, 03:54:34 UTC
ha, yeah, it is definitely something I would write about but not try. Thank you! :)

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