[fic] you look so fine; H/D, Veela!Draco, crack!Horror!smut! - 2/2

[michi_thekiller]

title: you look so fine
Part: 2/2
WARNINGS: mild gore, graphic sex, very very NC-17
Summary: Draco is a Veela and Harry is his mate. Crack Horror, by yours truly.
Notes: curiouslyfic prompted: Wings, Veela, H/D, smut, Crackfic/horror ficlet. For her, and for the ladies in chatzy who didn't know how crack horror worked. I wrote this very quickly, so it's not

Comments

[sometimesafox]

Wow... just wow. I love how you made Veela creatures of lust and violence, inhuman in their consumption of humanity, instead of just really pretty humans that like to fuck. Also nice to see canon being tied in in little references. Just one question, if Narcissia is Veela, than is she only a half sister to her siblings? Or maybe Ted Tonks went the same path as Harry and Lucius and found a way to keep his mate well fed.

[michi_thekiller]

Thank you!! I like to think of my Magical Creatures with a little more bite....of course, this ends up, every time, predictably with them eating people. But for Veela it makes sense, since they're supposed to be reminiscent of Sirens, and usually in mythology and things, magical beings are beautiful and alluring only when they want to lead people to their doom.

Anyway, I gave it some thought, and I think that perhaps maybe Andromeda Tonks (nee Black) would be the kind that would maybe think it's okay to step out for a bite or two as long as it was some bad miscreant or a vagrant that nobody would miss, with her sweet Muggle husband none the wiser.

I've been thinking of writing two companion stories, one for Lucius/Narcissa, and one as a sequel from Harry's POV, and both would probably touch upon this topic.

[pierian]

SEQUELS, YAAAAAAAY.

[ura_hd]

I would love love to read these sequels. Cannot wait!

[pierian]

That initial kiss stole my breath. Forget their breathlessness. I'm in need of air, and it's not even my kiss. In a story full of gore and blood, that moment of purity, framed by darker themes, shines beautifully. And the idea that names have power and if invoked thrice have even more meaning add a nice touch of magic.

If I had to describe this fic, it would be visceral. You're so good at honing in on instincts and expounding how the basic needs of all beings, creatures and humans, are comparable. Sighs, Michi, sighs. I will be going to bed with thoughts to mull over. <33

[michi_thekiller]

Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked it!

[michi_thekiller]

xD I'm glad you like it so much! I definitely have at least one sequel planned (eventually, after I've done some of this other shit I gotta do) and maybe I'd write more about their domestic life, because I do love these two.

I warn you, I don't write mpreg, especially not Veela!mpreg, so whatever Harry, veela!Draco, and a baby fic I came up with might not be what you're looking for xD

oooh, where did she rec it? *_* may I see?

[talekayler]

yfehuw; gybvsjefn Fuckeijfnj MICHI. There's just... I can't... I don't think I can fully comprehend what just happened! It's exceedingly powerful, and dark, and just guh, how it's not easy on them, and so bloody perfect, pun very much intended. How there's so much torment, guilt or lack of, how the both of them are so different in how they handle it all from the war to the nature of the veela. And yet they still manage to - I dunno, come together? You've made me extremely curious over what happened to Ron and Hermione, and my imagination won't be as good as I know you'll make it, as well as how Lucius and Narcissa manage this.

So... *cough* When is this 'sequel' going to be done? Maybe I'll just look for signs of Curi flailing! :D

[michi_thekiller]

EEEEE!! Tale!!! \o/ *flails for Tale* Thank you so much for reading and I'm so so pleased, smugly pleased, that you liked!

Ron and Hermione will definitely be addressed from Harry's POV, and why he does the things he does, and why he feels the way he does, and what he should do, and all that fun stuff. xD

aaaahhhh I can't even start work on sequel till after BB!! But I promise it shall be done and *LUFFS ON YOU*

[talekayler]

YES, GAWD THE BB TOO!! *flails all over the place in preparation*