[fic] you look so fine; H/D, Veela!Draco, crack!Horror!smut! - 2/2

[michi_thekiller]

title: you look so fine
Part: 2/2
WARNINGS: mild gore, graphic sex, very very NC-17
Summary: Draco is a Veela and Harry is his mate. Crack Horror, by yours truly.
Notes: curiouslyfic prompted: Wings, Veela, H/D, smut, Crackfic/horror ficlet. For her, and for the ladies in chatzy who didn't know how crack horror worked. I wrote this very quickly, so it's not

Comments

[bf_mom]

Huhh, huhh, that was something! Passion at the best :) Lovely, sweet, disgusting and romantic and very very funny at the same time :D I was prepared to something like Harry taming Draco to eat from his hands, kind of literally, but Dolohov's appearance was much better :)

[tigersilver]

You are the Golden Child; you are the Wunderbar!
OMG, that just dripped (along with various bodily fluids) the most incredibly hawt sex I think I've read in ages and it was-f**king-scalpel-edged (lyrical, too, damn it, as if there aren't 7,000 good things to be said about this already!) CLEVER!
OMG, I am your fan♥ I sincerely hope you don't mind if I friend you. I've read other lovely thing penned by your brilliant hand, but this is cake. This is the kind of cake I love best: rich, moisty, fruity and studded with current-like bon mots.
Oh, yes...FAN, here.

[michi_thekiller]

!!!!!!!!!! I am delighted, absolutely delighted, that you liked it so much! Your comment tickled me with delight. The comparison to cake! I love it - who doesn't love cake? Please friend, I'll friend back :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[tigersilver]

INSTANT GLOMP!
Already there, darlin'!
Now I shall purr at you, twine 'round your ankles, read all your stuff and bask:> EEEE!

[michi_thekiller]

You're too adorable! Added back! xD Feel free to browse through whatever you see here, welcome and please enjoy ♥

[bloodyroseblack]

ummm... I don't know wheter to be amazed or slightly disturbed so I'll go for both.
Amazed because of the new view point of a Veela, making them dangerous predators, I was like 'whatt???' when I read that part that Draco woke up to a bloodied ribcage... I had to re-read that part just to be sure I read it right. I liked how Harry dealt with this knowledge, the slow seduction and the way he researched how to become intimate with Draco and live to tell the tale ;)
and disturbed? well, that last scene... with Harry sitting there, stroking Draco's head after he ate... well umm...
But all in all I really enjoyed it!

[queenlucifer]

wow
this is just so fucking brilliant
funny, so bloody sadistic
the gore and the sex oh my
I just loved the dialogues
the nonchalance with which draco deals death and blood lust with
the need
God
I just loved reading this

[missingkeys]

I really enjoyed this. I don't typically like crack, but at the same time I'm not sure why you called it crack - nor 'mild' gore! :p - but this was a grand read. Poor old Dolohov. I'm very glad that Draco didn't eat Harry, and the sex was fabulous. I also really liked the plot here, and the humour. Great work.