Fic: I Wanted You Nearer, PG

[michigangirl30]

Title: I Wanted You Nearer
Author: michigangirl30
Fandom and Pairing: CSI:, Nick/Greg
Rating: PG
Prompt: Touch, #15 Epiphany
Warnings: Set in Season 6, small spoilers for Grave Danger.
Notes: This was started a long while ago, I think as another idea for the 'smoke' or 'dirty' challenge.
Summary: Who's to blame for so much wasted time?

Comments

[rabidfan]

I like this line..."The easy relaxed nature of their work was gone, but something new was ther, a feeling that Nick had put away long ago. It felt like anticipation."

I could see the two of them fumbling around with the new feelings...you expressed it really well. Yeah, a little angsty...but with lot's of hope at the end.

I really liked it. And since my A/C is off-line again...and the repair service won't be here before Wednesday afternoon...it was a great distraction!

[michigangirl30]

I'm glad you liked that, I was having a hard time trying to end it. I could have gone on, but it would have been epic and probably a bit boring.

Sorry about the AC, that just sucks. I hate when machinery refuses to work properly- we just had our washing machine blink out on me again. Thankfully Scott figured out how to fix it. Of course, this now means I have five loads of laundry to catch up on, but at least I don't have to drag it to the laundromat!

[anmani]

Wow, you still know how to wield words.
The intensity between them so strong and yet oddly familiar. TPTB never gave us much on how they handled things after Grave Danger. Whereas the others got to show their altered feelings towards Nick far more.

Really lovely job.
/A

[michigangirl30]

Thank you, that is a lovely compliment!

I hated how we never got to see how Greg handled any of the after of Grave Danger, it's like they skipped him. So I wrote it in my own head- this was the least 'romantic' version and, IMHO, the most realistic.

Thanks for taking the time to read it!

[boy_ish]

Very well written, the words work so well together. I really admire your ability to speak so well within your fiction. I liked how you played them, too. You always have the ability to make them 'men', but not to an unrealistic extreme, and while still hanging on to some form of vulnerability.

I also liked the mention of his thighs burning from squatting. He always squats, and I have to imagine it ends up painful/difficult at some point (at least, for George, what with all the takes and whatnot).

[michigangirl30]

Thank you! I wasn't sure how it read anymore, I've read through it so many times.

Hee, I thought you might catch that. :) It worked it's way in there naturally (well, that and I needed them close enough in a reasonable scenario for Nick to have the chance to touch Greg in that almost unconscious manner).

Maybe I'll take to time to post this elsewhere now.
Thanks!

[allmuzedup]

oh this is just lovely. *sighs* well done! i admire how you all really make them sing in their characters. keep it up!

[michigangirl30]

Thank you! I always hope I don't stray away from the heart of the characters.

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it!

[csikat]

I love the tension. great story!

[michigangirl30]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! : )