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michigangirl30

The first of my flist writing challenges

Jan 19, 2006 18:44

First up, elmyraemilie's request:

Nick/Greg
Situation of my choice
Greg in eyeliner
PLUS: a little inspiration from an old Prince song

Not sure if this is meets expectations... was trying to keep it around 1000 words and it went in a different direction than even I expected. But yah, that's become the usual for me.

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boy_ish January 20 2006, 07:07:50 UTC

I love how you described Nick's disappointed realization, crushing his previous illicit excitement.

A non-corny take on the old club scene. I didn't find myself cringing, and I didn't find things too fast or confessions unrealistic. I like that you focused on Nick recognizing this 'compulsion', and that there was a mix of, as he claimed, curiosity with his desire. That it wasn't just his dick leading him.

Are you going to count this for your song!fic prompt on wordclaim?

boy_ish January 20 2006, 07:10:31 UTC

Eep, never mind--you did. That's what I get for not having that community on my friendslist, and not even knowing you'd posted it on nickngreg until now...heh.

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 14:35:46 UTC

I was hoping his emotions would come across, especially since it was sort of an UP and DOWN experience for him. And WHEW! 'non-corny' makes me very happy to hear. ;)

I can't imagine Nick only thinking with his dick, which actually made this a little harder to get just right. His reaction to Lady Heather's made me think that while he may not be 'in' to it, he would be understandably curious. Yet he wouldn't tell anyone or conciously go looking to find out more but... to see his good friend (and crush, heh) Greg all made up, it would be an opportunity to at least have a little peek.

Yeah, I got busy posting this thing all over the place last night and used it as my song!fic prompt because I'm not sure when I'll be so literally inspired by lyrics again, or at least, attempt to actually write them.

Glad you liked it!

realm_of_red January 20 2006, 13:32:31 UTC

I loved the line about the shirt that "clung like a jealous girlfriend". That was GREAT!

Good story, love love love my Greggo in eyeliner, and Nick following him, so sweet and so hot. Are you going to continue this? Hope so!

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 14:38:03 UTC

Eee, hee, hee! I'm so happy someone noticed it! It felt a little corny at first but it just felt like something Nick would think, so I left it in.

Not making any promises about continuing, as I have a bunch more challenges to get to, but it's not without possibility. ;)

sillie82 January 20 2006, 14:25:56 UTC

*loves*

michigangirl30 January 20 2006, 14:41:45 UTC

You like Greg in eyeliner? NOOOO. ;)

*soooo happy*

sillie82 January 20 2006, 14:43:01 UTC

serenity151979 January 20 2006, 19:39:04 UTC

*dribble*

Oooh, I have such an eyeliner!Greg kink.... and you have fed it well! =D

This was totally hot.

michigangirl30 January 21 2006, 00:17:43 UTC

*hands you dribble towel*

Awesome, I'm so glad you think so. ;)

ohmygah_x January 20 2006, 22:16:17 UTC

Oh, wow.

In the five minutes that took me to read this, my stomach did a flip for every second. That was extremely hot: Nick and Greg in a club, bodies packed tightly together in one room, the thudding beats of the music. Oh, yes. You made my day!

michigangirl30 January 21 2006, 00:19:55 UTC

And you've made mine! Yeah for five minutes well spent! Wish I could produce these in that short amount of time.... hee.