excerpts from "in translation"

[mickeylimon]

interlocked and entwined
limbs lost in arms
in translation
in progression
of desperate recession
of control over ...
everything

ornate symmetry
with bodies colliding
side by side
stride open wide
fulfilling
quenching
outbursts of impulse descending
over powerless struggle
of mind and mindless indulgence
falter
falter
lets indulge together

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[thatsmissjess2u]

First, LOVE LOVE LOVE. It makes me, well that could be graphic. And second, coffee black-and egg white. Pull me out from inside, I am ready, I am ready, I am ready, I am...

An all time favorite.

awww

[mickeylimon]

i love love love that song too which i saw on that cruel intentions movie, that part when ryan and reese saw each other at the station and ended up well u know hahahah part of the inspiration i guess was that :D

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[thatsmissjess2u]

Its just a great movie in general. Sad thing is I know it word for word. Pathetic. You should buy the soundtrack. More musical yumminess there as well

Re: awww

[mickeylimon]

yeaaa i have the soundtrack and you are right one of those complilations ul listen from start to end lots of goodies :D

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[writerslitmuse]

I am the Poetry editor for "The Writer's Literary Muse."
I enjoyed reading this poem. I'd like to invite you to submit this poem and up to four others for our June issue. You can submit your work at: thewritersliterarymuse@Gmail.com and you can visit us at: http://www.thewritersliterarymuse.com We publish a traditional print magazine monthly. Please include a brief bio, our readers will want to know something about you. Sincerely
Editor

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[mickeylimon]

oh hi,

thank you, i will sign up on your site and submit this along with a few that i love. :)

thanks again,
mickey