Sweet Like Lemonade (1/1)

[mickeylover303]

Um...this is my white flag. There's a bunch of other stuff, too, but I'll just start with this. Whatever this is. At least it's finished.

It's been so long, though. I missed the quaintness that is lj.

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Characters: Naruto/Sasuke, Suigetsu/Sasuke
Rating: PG
Words: 712
Summary: "I highly doubt I couldn't live without you."

Comments

[syrraki]

um. the first line. way to throw me into the scene!
all cute and sasuke and naruto i love them here.

this:

Sasuke reaches with a finger and thumb to gently pull on Naruto’s cheek. “You really are such a baby. Who knows why I still like you so much.”

made me make a sort of GEEEEGEGEGEGE noise. idk what you want to make of that.

[mickeylover303]

Ah, well, it's been a while, so I'm grateful they still appeared to be Naruto and Sasuke. That's all I can hope for.

I want to make good of it. Most good. It's a special noise, and I feel even specialer since you liked the part I liked, too. Because it's hard writing a fluffy Sasuke.

[dazynl8]

Welcome back half a month ago!! And in a way this is me welcoming me back too (again), nothing like a healthy dose of sasuke and naruto and squealing like a banshee. Except not as irritating, hopefully.

This kinda took me back to Apartment 402, some reference about SasuSui that's kinda stuck with me since.

[mickeylover303]

Omg bb, I always seem to miss you when you're on lj, but welcome back to you, too. ∩(︶▽︶)∩ How are you doing?

[dazynl8]

SQUEEE! look at them!!! he. I am doing greatly thanks, Tryna settle back to the boringness of life after the not boringness that is holi-holidays! :)

Oh my, but I remember because I liked it far too much. And I don't mind that you think it's repetitive, even though I'd only notice if I squint and read everything all in one go. Which I won't. That's madness.Just don't. stop.

I agree with the fluff. Wish I could write fluff without turning it into a pool of angst, angry faces and at least one character death. But I'm guessing you've been there too.

[mickeylover303]

Boring can be fun, lol. Makes those surprises a little bit more exciting, you know. But at least the Winter hols are coming up soon. Best time of the year, I like to think.

Well, thank you. I'm glad you did, even if it wasn't as, um... polished as it could have been. *g* And yeah, that's being very generous, because I can be very negligent at times.

Wanna switch places? Ugh, I wish I could write angst without turning it into super duper love love days mush.