I LOVE YOU GOODBYE

[mickypyc]

You look in my eye and I took your hand

I’m sorry I can’t stay; I’m not the one you need

I can’t give the love you wanted

Loving you is wrong

I love you and you know I do

I have to set you free

This is the only way I know

You deserved to be happy not with me

You love him more than to me

Someone is waiting for you

Truly loves you more than

Comments

[seckvoon1008]

it is a great and lovely poem !
GANBATTE!

[ahri_mr]

It's beautifull but sad.
Giving up someone that you love is always painful

[ext_183343]

So sad..
This poem is so beautifully scripted
I think love is the strongest emotion of all, and when you love you love deep and true. It cannot be lost, it cannot be stopped. there is no control over love. it last's for all time, even when circumstances and suroundings change. love still lives on.
losing the thing most precious to you. is painful, you feel incomplete, you feel at loss. your soul it speaks.
But in time i hope you find the love you search for. And you can learn to trust in love again. You deserve happiness. you deserve to smile and love again.
Ai

[xhirinx]

so sad!!!
CHEER UP!!!
your really good at writing poems..they touch people's hearts ^^

Sad poem! T__T

[charcox33]

wah! This is really sad!

Your Happiness

I saw you and her that night,
Standing under the bright moonlight,
You were holding on to her hands,
You two were looking into each others eyes.
I could see you still loved her,
I could always see that,
I just didn't want to admit it,
I just didn't want to admit that,
The person you love was her and not me.
It hurt so much,
The one you had always loved,
Was her and not me.
How I wish I could be the one,
The one you have longed for,
But,
I wasn't.
I tried my best to show you,
But,
You didn't noticed it at all,
You were always talking about her.
Although it hurt,
I still listened,
Because,
I didn't wanted you to stop smiling,
Your smile,
Your happiness,
You being happy,
Is all I want.

O___O WOW! Another one! O__O Wow. :X I didn't know I could write poems like this. O___O

~Charco