Five Things...

Dec 10, 2007 11:11

I know the Five Things challenge over at brokebackslash is over, but this has been nagging me for a little while. It didn't turn out quite how I planned, but I decided to post it anyway.
Five Things Jack Twist Taught His Son )

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Five Things bmshirts December 10 2007, 18:47:40 UTC
Geez! Very nice, but number one was heartwrenching. Poor, sad Jack, finally giving up all hope. The worst thing that could happen to a man for whom hope was the sustaining force. Perhaps, for him, death was a welcome thing after all. Thanks so much. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Carole

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Re: Five Things midget_size December 11 2007, 17:05:11 UTC
Yeah, it was definitely the worst thing that could happen to him. :( Thank you!

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tmn1966 December 10 2007, 21:30:54 UTC
It's interesting reading another person's take on things. Makes me think of things I've missed or maybe change my point of view.

I have to say, I really, really liked number four and the last part about not letting no fat bastard raise your kid. Excellent!

So sad about number one. Boy, your last words for each of the five are killer! So glad you shared!

Thank you!

Teri

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midget_size December 11 2007, 17:06:02 UTC
Thanks! I love reading other peoples' takes on things too.

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vln_bbmfan December 11 2007, 00:13:40 UTC
*sniffle*
A sad testament to a sad life.
But very well written! :-)

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midget_size December 11 2007, 17:06:57 UTC
Thank you! *Hands over tissue*

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trekfan December 11 2007, 01:59:58 UTC
#1 broke my heart! So Bobby saw his dad's dead body :( How terribly sad. I keep wondering if Jack told Bobby about Ennis and if he ever looked Ennis up.

very nicely done

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midget_size December 11 2007, 17:07:38 UTC
Thanks! We know Jack mentioned Ennis, but I don't think he ever really told Bobby what Ennis meant to him. Maybe he knew anyway?

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