I know the Five Things challenge over at brokebackslash is over, but this has been nagging me for a little while. It didn't turn out quite how I planned, but I decided to post it anyway. ( Five Things Jack Twist Taught His Son )
Geez! Very nice, but number one was heartwrenching. Poor, sad Jack, finally giving up all hope. The worst thing that could happen to a man for whom hope was the sustaining force. Perhaps, for him, death was a welcome thing after all. Thanks so much. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Carole
#1 broke my heart! So Bobby saw his dad's dead body :( How terribly sad. I keep wondering if Jack told Bobby about Ennis and if he ever looked Ennis up.
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I have to say, I really, really liked number four and the last part about not letting no fat bastard raise your kid. Excellent!
So sad about number one. Boy, your last words for each of the five are killer! So glad you shared!
Thank you!
Teri
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A sad testament to a sad life.
But very well written! :-)
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very nicely done
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