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WPFAAT, Chapter 21

Aug 07, 2008 20:37

So, here you go. The next chapter. I don't know how I feel about it. Part of me wants to keep fiddling with it until I like it more, but I think I'd end up doing more harm than good. There's going to be one more chapter (!) and then the epilogue, and then, guys...it'll be the end. I honestly might cry.

( Chapter Twenty One )

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Wow norcalmusicmegs August 19 2008, 01:34:14 UTC

I definitely got chills reading this. Your descriptions of even the smallest things such as an intake of breath or gesture is phenomenal. Great work! :)

bcatjr August 22 2008, 13:38:37 UTC

Just a quickie here. I'm reading the first book and just love it!!! Excited about reading book two. Since it looks like you've got seasons going, I see at least two more books! ((Hint hint))

((Insert big smilie face here))

Again, I'm just loving it. Will leave comments when I get back from vacation.

samtyr September 4 2008, 02:44:05 UTC

Trying to play catch-up now; my apologies for not finding this sooner. This is a really good chapter. I'm glad to know that Bobby will be ok (well, it sounds like it anyway) and that Kurt's mom seems to be improving somewhat. It's also interesting to read about the connection that Junior and Kurt have; it sounds like they are soul mates. I am sorry to see this end because I have enjoyed it so much, and I am off to catch up on the remaining chapters. Thank you so much for sharing this.