Awwww...thanks. =^^= I'm glad it came off as realistic and sweet. I really like writing about this stage of their relationship, when I'm not writing smutty scenes. I like watching them try to sort through their feelings. Believe or not these short little scenes are harder to write than those epic smut fics. ;-) I always want and try to take them further and make them longer. However, when I try to do so, it usually ends up messing with the dynamic and simplicity of the moment; then I just cut the extra stuff out, write one or two more lines, and voila--scenes's done
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Haha, I can imagine these scenes being harder to write... you've got to show the deep respect, affection, and developing love they have for each other, while not making it all obvious and openly romantic. ^_^ In contrast, the smut scenes have their challenges, but at least you can have Sephiroth and Hotaru being all schmoopy all over each other and it fits that stage of their relationship. XD Of course, I like the occasional bit of schmoop. ;-) But yeah, whereas with a smut fic you can, say, have Sephiroth openly admitting his adoration, this sort of fic has to involve him not recognizing his own feelings, reaching out to Hotaru without confessing anything, etc etc... you do a great job with it
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Yes, once again you need to write ASAP, especially if you're going to leave fangirldom for a whole three weeks...lol. ;-) I was unware of the fact that you didn't have a laptop; in that case it's perfectly understandable that you don't write, plus parents being around has got to make things awkward or at least put a damper on your "smut vibe" (for lack of a better way to put it). A travel fic would be very nice and sweet to write. I've shamefully neglected my paper writing in favor of writing another fic and a ficlet
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