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[midnightbeloved]

I stood at the edge, wasted away in the words that were caught tangled in the base of your neck. The music rose gently from your parked SUV; Another song of heartbreak from another teenage boy singing his lungs out just to cut through his time. It was as if I knew you would catch...if I could only just fall. But I couldn't let go and slip under the

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[northshore_hxc]

Did you write that? Cuz it sounds so familiar.

[midnightbeloved]

yes I wrote it....

it's alot like everything else I write though (because I'm a loser that can't move on), so maybe that's why it seems familiar.

[northshore_hxc]

Noooo you're not a loser. It was very pretty, despite being very sad. Or maybe that's why it was pretty...cuz it was sad. Anyway, alot of people can't move on, hon. There's alot of areas in my life I can't move on from. It'll get better in time. =)

[trethlyn]

I'd cry but I'm pretty sure that I'm not supposed to at work.

[midnightbeloved]

awww....I love you York!

[throw_the_bones]

This does sound familiar... Have you already posted it?

[midnightbeloved]

I haven't posted it...it was new...but it was pretty much just like all my other poetic rambles, so that's probably why it sounds familiar...

[throw_the_bones]

Not all of your stuff sounds the same. This is the first time I thought that it sounded familiar.

[colby_the_corn]

you are an amazing writer!

[midnightbeloved]

awww, thanks Katie! <3333