And If You Wrong Us, Shall We Not Revenge? (Sansa & Petyr, T)

[midnightblack07]

Title: And If You Wrong Us, Shall We Not Revenge?
Fandom: Game of Thrones/ASoIaF
Characters/Pairings: Sansa & Petyr
Rating: T
Words: ~1.055
Warnings: Spoilers for AFFC
Written for: bloodofpyke's AU Comment Ficathon prompt Sansa kills Petyr...
Summary: How cruel it was, that in the end only Alayne Stone could have saved Sansa Stark...

Comments

[jal80]

Ahhhhhh!! ALL THE FEELS! I LOVE this, and could totally see it happening. In fact, I really, really hope it happens.

And this bit: "Sansa Stark's father never showered her with such compliments, was a man of few words--a man of the North with more winter in his veins than she could have ever boasted. Alayne knows better than to resent him for it now, looks back at the pride in his eyes--the softness of his tone-- with an ache in her heart Sansa would never have fathomed."

OW MY HEART. So, so beautiful and so true to both Sansa and Ned.

Also, soooooo....after this, Jon totally comes and finds her and is all impressed with her, and then they Do The Sex, right? ;)

[midnightblack07]

GAAH THANK YOU SO MUCH BB, I'm so glad you liked it!! :D<33

I want this (or any variation of Sansa beating Petyr at his own game) to be canon--IT IS THE ONLY ACCEPTABLE OUTCOME OF HER TIME WITH HIM LOL

Also, soooooo....after this, Jon totally comes and finds her and is all impressed with her, and then they Do The Sex, right? ;)

NATURALLY, OF COURSE :p hehe you know me too well!!

&& btw have you signed up for this round of the got_exchange??

[jal80]

I HAVEN'T. I don't think I'm going to have time to do it this round which fills me with sorrow. :( BUT I have more Jon/Sansa stuff to write, and I'm thinking of tackling some Robb/Jeyne. I need to branch out. ;)

[midnightblack07]

aww I'll definately miss you there, but so long as you continue to write awesome fic I will be happy hehe <333

& yaay Robb/Jeyne are one of my favorite GoT/ASoIaF ships so I definitely wouldn't discourage you from tackling them :p

[lainemontgomery]

This is absolutely beautiful. I love the use of language here- your spare phrasing is a perfect conduit for Sansa's inner dialogue. The Sansa vs. Alayne dichotomy is really sophisticated, and it's very clear that she needs to compartmentalize these two sides to herself before she can do what needs to be done.

She can sense the confusion, can hear the unspoken questions and a part of her (the part that can still feel the countless lashes on her back, that can still taste the wine on his tongue) revels in it, revels in the fact that for once--just once--it is them who know nothing and she who knows everything.

This line. Flawless.

Incredible work, lovely!

[midnightblack07]

omgosh THANK YOU BB, this meand so much coming from you (give how much I adore your work <333)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! :D

[just_a_dram]

Ohhh, I always love a good Sansa kills Petyr fic, because what outcome wouldn't be more deserved?

I love that you have her using some of the skills he taught her in order to bring him down. Such poetic justice.

All the references to her real father work perfectly as a contrast that not only betrayed Ned, but also had the nerve to play the improper father to Ned's child.

She wonders is he has forgotten her father (she knows better than to ever entertain the idea that he has forgotten her mother)

No doubt! There's a underlying chill to the whole thing. As if the reader feels alternatively numb and full of rage right along with Sansa.

Beautifully done, my dear.

[midnightblack07]

gaah thank you bb, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! :D

I love the poetic justice of Sansa using the skills Petyr taught her to take him down too, and if it doesn't happen in the books I'll be pretty disappointed tbh :/

[embossedsilver]

This is stunning.

revels in the fact that for once--just once--it is them who know nothing and she who knows everything.

Uh, all my player!Sansa feelings!

[midnightblack07]

aww thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! :D

#Sansa knows how this game is played :p