When it reaches the ocean

Dec 17, 2011 04:09

Title: When it reaches the ocean
Pairings: Slight Ohmiya, generally Nino-centric
Rating: PG-13
Beta: fel93
Genre: Psycological?
Disclaimer: The characters in this story are not mine
Summary: Venture into the mind of a troubled soul...; if you find it confusing, it's because he's more confused than you are.

A/N: There isn't much viewing pleasure for this fic,  ( Read more... )

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yumi_usagi December 19 2011, 17:30:16 UTC
I can feel Nino confusion about which paths should he take in his life. But at last choose the direction to the future by following his heart ne. And the other 4 encourage him in their own ways.
Thank you for sharing! I enjoy reading this :)

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midshadow December 20 2011, 15:07:44 UTC
I'm glad someone understood and enjoyed this fic! I was worried about it since it's so unclear. >< it also talks about a loss of confidence and a helplessness, like as if he's tired of looking. I don't know if I managed to convey that hehe. Sorry for rambling!
Thank you for reading! ^^

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midshadow December 20 2011, 16:56:27 UTC
I had lots of reservations about this fic so I'm really very happy that this fic appealed to you! ^^ describing everything metaphorically while trying to show the insane inner confusion was very challenging >< haha.
Thank you for reading!

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midshadow December 25 2011, 03:20:25 UTC
I'm really glad that you think so! Thank you so much for your compliments! I'm glad you liked it. <3

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himitsu_17 December 21 2011, 19:12:16 UTC
Wahoo ! It was really interesting !
I love the idea and the way you wrote it !! ♥
Thanks for sharing ♥

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midshadow December 25 2011, 03:24:49 UTC
I'm happy that you found the idea for this fic interesting! ^^ this is an extremely odd fic and was sort of like an attempt to see how far I can go to illustrate the idea of confusion, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it! It was an interesting experience writing it too!
Thank you for reading again! <3

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