Okay, I have to admit, the pairing here TOTALLY threw me and almost made me not read, but MAN. I'm kind of glad I did. The writing is excellent, of course, and you have the mood of the movie here SO well. The bit about the Canadian gay bar being a TREE and the beaver glaring and all the little asides about Chris's father were AWESOME.
Most of all, I'm amazed how you kept them in character and still made it completely believable. Very well done.
This just made my WEEK! *flails* A curler walks into a bar...ohh, if Men With Brooms had been a pornfilm, this is what PG would have written. The bagpipes! Chris! (man, I am in awe of how well you got him) being chatted up by the juggernaut with the subtlety of...well, a juggernaut! The gay bar! And al fresco sex aginst a tree in the snow *hearts;s some more*. I am *so* glad you picked this one, thankyouthankyouthankyou!
omg this is fabulous! I love that Yount is so silent and chaste and apparently boiling over with unspoken *want*, but can't express it (and hi, I'm flashing on Fraser here for some reason :P), but it *works*. And of course Cutter just goes with it. Such vivid images, and the bit of temperature play is great, too -- I can practically see their skin steaming in the freezing air.
I LOVE you. and I Love this PROMPT. and I love that I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT! *\o/*
omg. Canadian gay bar. the BEAVER. you wrote in the BEAVER. And hi, sex between chris and the JUGGERNAUT should NOT BE HOT. AND YET. You made it that way. You actually wrote an AWESOME FIC, and it was slashing the JUGGERNAUT. I just - love you beyond the telling of it. WOW.
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Most of all, I'm amazed how you kept them in character and still made it completely believable. Very well done.
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OMG SO WRONG!!!! *runs to actually read*
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"You've never been to a Canadian gay bar?"
Is it much different from a gay bar in Butt Butte, Montana? ;-)
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This just made my WEEK! *flails* A curler walks into a bar...ohh, if Men With Brooms had been a pornfilm, this is what PG would have written. The bagpipes! Chris! (man, I am in awe of how well you got him) being chatted up by the juggernaut with the subtlety of...well, a juggernaut! The gay bar! And al fresco sex aginst a tree in the snow *hearts;s some more*. I am *so* glad you picked this one, thankyouthankyouthankyou!
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I LOVE you. and I Love this PROMPT. and I love that I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT! *\o/*
omg. Canadian gay bar. the BEAVER. you wrote in the BEAVER. And hi, sex between chris and the JUGGERNAUT should NOT BE HOT. AND YET. You made it that way. You actually wrote an AWESOME FIC, and it was slashing the JUGGERNAUT. I just - love you beyond the telling of it. WOW.
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