for ALL OF YOU: "Bad Luck Streak in Dancing School" (Twitch City) by brooklinegirl

[midsummer_fic]

Title: Bad Luck Streak in Dancing School
Author: brooklinegirl
Recipient: all of you midsummer_fic folk
Fandom: Twitch City

Many thanks for inspiration, beta, and several key lines from the wondrous ms. pearl_o Apologies to estrella30 for, uhm, Don McKellar's existence.

Comments

[brooklinegirl]

Thank you SO MUCH. You have to just - pull yourself out of any semblance of reality to write in Twitch City and realize that everything is CRAZY and anything goes. *grins*

[pearl_o]

SQUEE.

[brooklinegirl]

*twirls* You made it happen, you smart, smart girl!

[anonymous]

great job capturing the infuriating nature of the curtis/hope relationship from the show. and your newbie was completely spot-on. in particular the newbie/hope kissing was great - so hot, so newbie. i mean, this alone sums it up:

"Oh god," she said, opening her eyes, and staring up at the fluorescent lights. "Curtis."

"Newbie," said Newbie, not even looking up from her breast before taking her nipple in his mouth again.

yes! perfect newbie right there! thank you - tally

[brooklinegirl]

Thank you! That's it exactly, it's infuriating, and you just have to GO with it. And YAY! that line you quoted totally cracked me up writing it - I'm glad it worked!

[brooklinegirl]

HEE! yay! thank you! I re-watched the series in order to write this and realized you CAN'T pin Curtis's characterization down - he's unpredictable, except for the fact that he will take anything and everything he can possibly get out of a situation. Thank you!

[lynnmonster]

Oh, hell, yes, this was fabulous and fantastic and so "Twitch City" that I'm grinning my face off.

*MWAH*

[brooklinegirl]

*giggles* YAY! I was panicking over how to write it, b/c omg their motivations never make any SENSE, but then - if you just GO with that? It comes remarkably easily. *twirls*