Fic: The First Nine Times

[midvacent]

Rating: Mature, for swear words.
Summary: And he really, really shouldn't be doing this, but damn if it doesn't feel good.
To ophelia_winters, this is all for you, I hope you like it.
Thanks to bugiarda, for the most fantastic beta-ing service.
Thanks to haro for himitsu_santa and general awesomeness, it was a wonderful secret santa experience.
Prompt at the end to avoid spoilers.

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Comments

[belantana]

Yay! This made me grin all over again. Well done.

Big Fucking Guns, ha I should've guessed that one. I still love the ending, and I love: The immortal, the Time Lord, and the hybrid. Three silhouettes against the splendour of the universe.

Um, Happy Christmas, I guess!

[midvacent]

Hey, thanks! I love my pretty lines, I'm glad you do to.

Happy Christmas to you! :D

[scarletsherlock]

This was both sexy and cute, and I too liked Big Fucking Guns. hee. I am sad that we won't get this Team Torchwood.

[midvacent]

Thank you! I never really thought about it, but yeah, this version of TTW would be very entertaining.

[ophelia_winters]

*squees and flails*
I'm blushing so hard right now because I don't think I'll ever be able to thank your for how awesome this is!! I'm all a-flutter! Sweet 'n sexy! Really wonderful. The Doctor lessening his protectivness over her with each scenario, Jack and Jenny's steps in their little dance..and then a hybrid tardis and a world of adventure! It's like they became a really backwards version of the Doctor and Rose in the end! I love how you kept the ending sort of open like that, always leaves room for more awesome.
He doesn't get a moment to think until after, and even then, he's too drunk and just relieved to give it much thought.
I kind of love that part, and Im not sure why it strikes me, but I love it.
"Well, ok then," he says, and takes a sip of his own. He watches her pour another drink. She avoids his gaze.
Again, it's just a line. Quite simple, but still you manage to make it oh so sexy.
After minutes or seconds maybe, he can't tell, her expression shifts. Her eyes soften; she moves her hand to his face. Gently, almost

[midvacent]

'm blushing so hard right now because I don't think I'll ever be able to thank your for how awesome this is!!
You know what, that comment right there is thanks enough. :D I'm so happy you liked it. I mean really, I'm the one squeeing. Your comments are a gift by themselves. I'm really pleased it came over sweet and sexy. It's what I was going for. It's what their dynamic is.
Thank you so much.

[fatchickengirl]

Gorgeous, love jealous 'dad' Doctor...

[midvacent]

Thank you. So do I, so much fun to write.

[calophi]

This was fabulous. I'm a huge Jenny fan and I'm so happy to see her being developed so nicely here. :)

[midvacent]

Thanks! It was really fun to do, glad you think so.