untitled-chapter3

[miekissluv]

Title:  Untitled
Pairings: Yukido/Haiki
Disclaimer: I don’t own neither of them …this is a fiction only.
Genre: Drama/AU (multichapter)
Summary:  Yukihiro struggles in accepting himself as he struggles to fight his loneliness.
Chapter 1

Chapter 2: ~“Ah! That wasn’t a gift; it’s your lunch… I’m replacing the one from yesterday” Hyde snapped from his gaze

Comments

[androidsleep]

/o/ yes, third chapter! Sorry I haven't made any comments, I've been feeling too lazy for anything *lol

[miekissluv]

hehehh it's okay~no need to apologies~ anyway thanks for reading<3

I'm glad to know you love the fic, I was so afraid that it was too bored/dull or too mellow/girlish (I'm a girl after all-can't help to be girlish) ahh me and my lack of knowledge and research~ I guess I'm one of those 'many people' who didn't know that born-deaf people can actually learn how to speak.I know that they could produce sound but it wasn't quite what we called a word (come to think of it, there is the helen killer story whom a born-deaf and blind-but then she learn how to speak- why didn't I think of it earlier), now I know that there's still hope for those people (THANK YOU for pointing it out for me)

I might look out for it, if you get interested :3
it is sound interesting...but if it is troubling you, just don't mind me~.~

*laugh* I wonder what all those 'bizarre' things that you think about>_< hehehhh so it wasn't an accident after all XD well maybe this is a bad news, but the next chapter maybe a little late since I had only two weeks left for my

[kamui_kinomoto]

Yaaaay, 3rd chapter~~! ♥ *happy dance* I'm glad I didn't have to wait for that long! XDDD

This chapter... is sooooo cute djhfjdghkd!!! o(>w<)o From Yukkie eating the bento that Hyde made, Yukkie's sister, the both of them looking forward to seeing each other at the train station... AAAAAAAAAAAAH SOOOOO CUTE AND FLUFFY KYAAAAAA I LOVE IT~! ♥ Every time Yukkie smiles, I smile too! (>w<)

When I read the 1st chapter, I told you I felt very sad ne~ But now my feelings have changed entirely! XDDD I now feel warm~~ *laughs* They're both so cuteeeeee~~ I can totally imagine them doing those things you wrote... at their current age! XD

Hohoho, more train dates please! XDDD I love trains too (well I ride one everyday so~~ XD)! <3

AND YES!! Thanks a lot to kamui_kinomoto, because she teaches me on the difference between using past and present tense when constructing a story, You're absolutely welcome~! ♥ Oh, I think I forgot to mention but there would be some verbs which would be correct if you use present tense... This is hard to explain but hopefully,

[miekissluv]

*happy dance with you* thanks for reading<3

ahh I'm really glad to know that, I don't think I'm good at writing fluffy and cute things, I'm scared it become too mushy or too dull(or even cliche)I felt like everything I wrote turns a little dull with no emotion at all

I can totally imagine them doing those things you wrote... at their current age! XDehhh!! though I write the story but still never mention that I imagined them to be around 18or something,I'm amazed that you can read it and imagined at their current age.But despite what age they are, the age is still just a chronological numbers only... none of the L'Arc member seem to be getting old~so if I were you, I might as well imagined the same thing too

[kamui_kinomoto]

I felt like everything I wrote turns a little dull with no emotion at all
Eeeeh!!! That's not true~~! I feel different emotions (such as I feel warm, sad, hopeful) when I read this, so it's totally NOT without emotions~! *nods*

*laughs* That's true ne~~ But I don't know why, maybe I'm weird because I totally can picture them doing and saying the cute things you wrote with their recent/current look/age~ ^^;;; But yeah, they're forever ageless so age doesn't really matter! XDDD

Yeah~ Train is cool! The only time I hate riding train is during rush-hour! Because people push or squeeze me and it's hard for me to breathe! XDD But then it's not totally the train's fault ne~ ;P

Ah~ Sorry for the late reply ne~ I lost my Internet connection at home for a few days and work has been really busy~ But I started (and almost finished) editing the 1st chapter... but I'm not satisfied with what I did yet! XD And I haven't put the explanations for the change yet~ So I hope it's okay to wait for a few more days ne~~ m(__)m*laughs* Don't worry about

[miekissluv]

Seriously, I'm glad to hear that ^______^

The ageless L'Arc member doesn't make you statement anywhere near weird, so YAY for L'Arc member *laugh*

TRUE!!!I was sandwiched during rush hours,luckily there's one company providing a train with the middle coach only for women, so even though we all squashed in those coach, but it less risky.

oh it's okay, there's no needs of you pushing yourself, I can wait till you feel satisfy enough ^___^

thanks~

[hydeko_takarai]

*reads all the chapters* OMG I absolutely love this fanfic~! >w< ♥♥♥ This chapter is soooooo cute I can't stop smiling! The train scene is just...kyaaaaahhhh~ ♥ x33

Waiting for more from you~! ^__^

[miekissluv]

kyaaaa...you reads mine? mine wasn't as yours actually, even my English was bad~

glad that you love it>__<

thank you for reading<3

[miekissluv]

sorry I meant mine wasn't as good as yours~see my English IS bad~

[hydeko_takarai]

Ahahah don't worry, I'm sure you can do better in the future! Even the best writers learn from scratch :) And I'm also still learning :)
Have confidence in yourself, you can do it~! I'm behind you 100%~!! ^o^/