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mierde

014. Green; Doubting My Decision

May 13, 2009 22:18

Title: Doubting My Decision
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Characters: Amelia Banks, Jennifer Keller, Ronon Dex, Rodney McKay
Prompt: 014 Green
Word Count: ~270
Rating: G.
Summary: I shouldn’t be one for jealousy.
Notes: Keller POV. Also, skipping Yellow for now as I think I’m going to leave the multipart stories til last. LDT.

( The monster with green eyes... )

fanfic100, stargate atlantis, amelia banks

Comments 4

renisanz May 13 2009, 21:04:18 UTC

Interesting.

:)

mierde May 14 2009, 07:08:37 UTC

good interesting or bad interesting? :s

renisanz May 14 2009, 07:16:42 UTC

Sorry, I put the smiley face to hint at the good.

One qualm I have about this, though is that it's kind of vague as to why Jennifer is jealous. But then, I suppose that is the point. She has all these great things going for herself, yet she still can't help but feel jealous about Amelia's relationship with guy Jennifer rejected. Maybe a small detail like there being something in the way he smiled at her, or she smiled at him...

mierde May 14 2009, 07:24:17 UTC

I was just thinking that the one thing Jennifer doesn't have going for her is an overabundance of confidence. Rodney may be safe enough for her but when she sees Amelia and Ronon, she can't help thinking 'what if'.
But then again I just thought everyone would be jealous of the girl Ronon was going out with ;)
Thanks for the thought. :D