Fic: You turn me upside down (I've lost the right side up) (The Prom)

Jul 08, 2023 19:29

Hello! Long time no see!

Since I am me, I had this particular idea in my head of what I wanted the opening story of my 100 Ships challenge to look like - as in, I figured it would only make sense to start with the ship I write the most, which is Alyssa/Emma. I had already a vague outline of a story which worked pretty well with the prompt, so that ( Read more... )

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lash_larue July 9 2023, 11:38:38 UTC

At the risk of repeating myself... even for you, this one is special. The feelings of both characters are plain to see and draw the reader in. I care about Alyssa and Emma, and wish them well.

What a splendid start!

L

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mierke July 28 2023, 10:15:41 UTC
Thank you so much ♥

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elizalavelle July 12 2023, 16:04:24 UTC
Great writing! It felt very much like it's own thing. You could take this and run with it into an original story I think.

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mierke July 28 2023, 10:16:40 UTC
Thank you! ♥

That's the thing with AUs, isn't it? I've tried to keep their personalities intact, but there's this line where fanfiction and fiction cross over into each other.

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elizalavelle July 28 2023, 11:42:34 UTC
I think you did well with the line. It is very much them. Those personalities could be tweaked a little to be their own people and then you'd have your own brand new work.

It was a good read.

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