One thing before I go on to the last part: “Who has a bloody pantry these days?” Arthur mutters under his breath, and if Merlin’s face wasn’t pressed tightly into the crook of his neck, he’d be sure he heard “prat” whispered against his skin. This sentence could be revised to clarify that Arthur wouldn't have heard it had Merlin not been pressed up against him.
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One thing before I go on to the last part: “Who has a bloody pantry these days?” Arthur mutters under his breath, and if Merlin’s face wasn’t pressed tightly into the crook of his neck, he’d be sure he heard “prat” whispered against his skin. This sentence could be revised to clarify that Arthur wouldn't have heard it had Merlin not been pressed up against him.
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