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miharudesu

fic: by accident (part 10)

Jun 22, 2009 22:33

Title: By Accident: part 10 - for those who were left behind
Genre: angst
Pairing(s): no pairings
Rating: PG-13 for violence and situations which may not be suitable for younger children
Disclaimer: Characters are not owned by me nor am I related to them in any way.
Author's Notes: I thought I'll update really early for a change. Your comments and ( Read more... )

story: by accident, je: arashi, (fanfiction)

Comments 31

asiangreencake June 24 2009, 03:01:27 UTC

Ooo can't wait for the next chapter..
i was starting to wonder where Ohno was BUT there he is!
Leaving everyone hanging :D
teehee

btw i luv this FF so far! I've read all 10 chapters today :D
horaay!!!

anywhoo
good job and keep up the great work!! :D
ganbare

miharudesu June 24 2009, 14:05:16 UTC

It's Ohno's turn to babysit :)
WOW, all of it one day??? That's a LOT~ thank you for reading!!! Glad you enjoyed it :D I'm gonna do my best until the ending.

lotr195 June 24 2009, 10:23:57 UTC

an update!
its getting so interesting!

miharudesu June 24 2009, 14:05:48 UTC

thank you for reading! glad you enjoyed it :D

adriennelouise June 24 2009, 23:00:11 UTC

Ohno!!! Oh, that makes me so happy! That and Nino being able to talk with Daisuke's mother. Weeee. Really can't wait for the next one! ^_^

miharudesu June 26 2009, 12:49:42 UTC

thanks! glad you liked it :D

morninglights June 26 2009, 18:13:45 UTC

I read this in a row now.. and I have to say... I'm captivated!

Your story is really good! It's a little confusing, that the officers call Nino Kazunari thought.
But the story is so interesting! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

But the cliffhanger was evil ò__ó

♥

miharudesu June 28 2009, 23:57:35 UTC

Wow, thanks! :D thanks for pointing out that it's a bit confusing, which part was it again so I can edit it better?
Thanks for reading! glad you enjoyed the story~

morninglights June 29 2009, 12:49:48 UTC

I think it's the whole Kazunari thing ^^' Because no police officer would say Kazunari I think.. It would be Ninomiya-san or Ninomiya-kun or at least just Ninomiya, but I don't think they would call him by his first name.

But that's a rather personal opinion XD So it's not incorrect :D

And please update soon ne <3 I'm so interested!

miharudesu June 30 2009, 22:09:11 UTC

ohhhh, right. I thought I won't use the terms "san" et.al. because Im not familiar with the correct usage. I ought to read more about it for future reference though. Thanks! :D

narusaku4vr June 28 2009, 00:47:33 UTC

HI! I really like your story. hope you update soon.

miharudesu June 28 2009, 23:55:53 UTC

thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it :)