ahh thank you, I am very glad you liked it and ya I know I have lots of grammer mistakes, I try to go over it but I manage to still overlook alot of things, sorry about that, but I am happy you enjoyed it none the less and ya I sort of liked that Naruto left too, I am kinda tired of Naruto always forgiving Sasuke so easily, I wouldn't and sometimes things don't end with rainbows and fluffy clouds so...ya, thank you for the comment I really appreciate it so much, ty ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
You should really continue to write. Practice, especially over the years, really helps. I like your ideas.
The next time you write something, maybe get a beta reader? They can help you a lot with grammar. I know I need a lot of help in my grammar, too. One can never catch all of their mistakes.
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You should really right more stories in general. I kinda like how this ends with Naruto leaving Sasuke. :)
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The next time you write something, maybe get a beta reader? They can help you a lot with grammar. I know I need a lot of help in my grammar, too. One can never catch all of their mistakes.
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