Fic: "Hiatus" (2/2)

[mijan]

Title: "Hiatus" (Part 2)
Rating:: NC-17
Word Count: 18,737
Pairing: McCoy/Kirk
Warnings/Temptings: BDSM, bondage, marking, biting, medical kink, Risk-Aware Consensual Kink, public play, D/s, and so on.
Summary: Jim is in over his head with classes and training at the Academy. He needs a break, and he won't take one on his own, so Bones makes him

Comments

[mijan]

The thing is... that's the way a lot of BDSM *is*. The real core of BDSM *is* the emotions and trust, and the actions are merely tools with which to express those emotions and trust. That's the core of BDSM to me, and to many other kinksters. Sure, some of it is about sensation, but none of the sensations and actions work without the emotions and the trust.

[mijan]

In that case, I consider it a privilege to share these insights into the world of BDSM with people. Most people don't understand it, and they only see the sensationalized stuff. But in reality, in GOOD BDSM, even when people play hard (leaving marks and welts and stuff), there is a profound amount of trust and emotion involved. Feel free to ask me questions if you'd like. :)

[rubymiene]

!!! This is perfect!
Jim's so cute when he's not totally sure what's going on. And love how Bones is swaggering in there and everyone else is ogling Jim's ass. I definitely wanted to see Jim parading around in that outfit.
Can't wait til Bones takes him back and they put on a show for the club...I think Jim will be down for it :D

[mijan]

YAY! I'm so glad you liked it! Was it what you wanted? I really wanted to make sure I got it right for you and treksnoopy.

Also... I based Jim's outfit on that getup Chris Pine wore in the Details photoshoot. In that outfit, I can't imagine anyone who *wouldn't* oogle his ass.

[rubymiene]

I loved it!
Only thing better would be video =P =P =P

[jlnyr]

I love how you write Bones taking care of Jim. As usual, very well done :-)

[mijan]

Thank you! I love Bones taking care of Jim, too. Jim also seems to be pretty fond of it. :)

[kel_1970]

This was such a fabulous glimpse into a world that is intriguing but that I know nothing about. As always, your work is extremely well written, and as always, shows depth to the characters and their relationship. I found it fascinating watching the journey, for Jim, from complete and utter physiological and emotional chaos and dysfunction, to total serenity, through Bones's care for him. I don't want to overuse the word "fascinating," but I'm going to, because it was fascinating seeing how perfectly Bones figured out what was going on with Jim and how to fix it, in ways that nobody else in Jim's life could possibly do. Thank you for a read that was interesting, educational, sweet, hot, sensual, and entertaining. Though "entertaining" sounds so ... weak ... for a piece of this level, your story took me completely out of the world I was sitting in and into another one, all three times I read it.

[mijan]

You read it three times? Seriously? *blinks*

I'm glad I could take you on this journey. And that's just it - a good scene IS a journey. It transports the bottom (and the top, actually) into a different state of mind and emotion. I've showed you guys "bottom-space" or "sub-space" in my stories, but eventually, I'm going to write a story from the top's point of view. The thing is... it's harder to explain "top-space" to someone. I've experienced both, and they're both magical in their own ways, but top-space is harder to write. In top space, your world completely revolves around your bottom in a way that is almost impossible to exaggerate. You're a musician, and your bottom is your symphony.

Anyway, I should stop waxing poetic. I'm just glad you enjoyed this one. :)

[northernwalker]

This was deliciously and delicately done. I like the sense of connection between the two of them. Also, it was steamy hot!

[mijan]

You're the second person who used the word "delicate" in describing this fic. Oddly, I think it fits. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!