Proof [01/05]

[mikaa22]

Before you protest on why I'm not updating Change Me today, let me explain first. :) No, I'm not abandoning it, in fact, I'm still working on it right now.

This fic idea just hit me a few weeks ago and I figured that I''ll write something Olympic-related for our hardworking Sakurai-caster. :D It's just a mini-series, just five chapters and the

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[raene_9]

woooh! this is interesting...Kaede as the female version of Jun...liked that :)
i guess Jun's DoS side kinda mellowed down this past few years, ne. he's laughing more now & sometimes crack a joke compared to seeing him in serious mode before ....thank Mikaa...wonder what will happen in London

[arasukishi]

Two points I liked in particular about this Sho:
1. "Tennis isn’t really famous sport in this country and I preferred playing a more popular one as a kid."
2. "She’s holding her racket and I am holding mine but I’d like to follow what’s written on according on my timetable or else, I’ll be out of sync for the rest of the day."
HAHAHA! I love these!

Also, your writing here is very, very different - not just because of the perspective. There's something very new about this story, and the way you're treating it. Almost as if you've entered Sakurai Sho's mentality, relaying his every thought in real time. It's great! I love it! I fell in love particularly with the intro! ::D Pls keep it up!

PS I'm not sure what I think about OK being hinted at as a female MJ though. Hmmmm. If I had to pick a Ship, I'd go for Sakumoto, but in this case, hmmm.

Pls update soon!

[mikaa22]

I tried, as much as possible, to get into his mind in the best and realistic way I can. And it's really a challenge writing in first person. Hmmm, the MJ thing... I didn't intend to subtly hints her as a female MJ, it's just that Sho reminds him of her. It's also my way of telling the readers she have this sort of character, seeing that this is written as a first person narrative, we can only get to see things through what Sho see and thinks. :)))

I will update this one and also Change Me, just not sure when. I'm still talking a breather. Heehee! :p Though, I don't think I can finish the rest of the four chaps in time for the Olympics closing ceremony like I what I said above.

[arasukishi]

I guess it makes more sense when you think of it that way ::) Thank you for that!

Never mind the upload sched now. Just please stay safe ::)

[mikaa22]

Luckily for me, I live in the higher areas of Quezon City. So we're not flooded at home. Stay safe and dry! :))

[mojojowan]

hello! :D

Okamoto Kaede is so mysterious ne? i hope she'll become a "soft person" in london.. with sho teeeheeheehee~ XD

thank you so much for sharing this ^U^

[greyskies_storm]

Wow! ♥ I really like the way you protrayed the girl and Sakurai's interactions. And the members bullying Jun. //sqeauls// Ahhhhh :D Can't wait to find out what happens next! ^^