Comments | mikantastic: one in the world

jyotsu in mikantastic

one in the world

Dec 24, 2010 00:10

.One In The World
.homin, angst/fluff
.whose smile was so bright he put the sun to shame
.i have a flu, and a history take-home test. what came up is 1000+ incoherent words inspired by Rihanna's "What's My Name" and The Spill Canvas' "Lullaby". also, what is beta i know not the word.

( He’d say your name and you’d fall into his lap with a huge smile, feeling like falling in love all over again. )

[theres]yunho, [itsa]wanshawt, [ithas]fluffeh!, [tehgrup]dbsk, [theres]changmin, [ithas]waaaaaaangst!

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jyotsu December 24 2010, 09:30:52 UTC

it's okay, i just posted this and it's been awhile since i updated anything xD

lol really? good to know it made its point then. :D

yue_akuma December 23 2010, 19:35:10 UTC

I'm very happy to notice that you're still epic in writings! ♥

This was sad but epic. Hope you'll be better soon! ♥

jyotsu December 24 2010, 09:57:49 UTC

lol what is epic i fail so hard.

thanks though ♥

yue_akuma December 24 2010, 12:05:00 UTC

WHAT FAIL, I DON'T SEE FAIL YOU!

izanamiwiles December 23 2010, 22:48:08 UTC

this is absolutely beautiful. Heartbreaking, and then putting back the pieces together. It's like a rollercoaster and that's what's magical about this.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. <3 <3
and for the first I think I'm not gonna ask for a sequel because everything has already been said, and you do not need to add a single word!
Thank you really ^^;
*hugs*
=^^=

jyotsu December 24 2010, 09:58:39 UTC

awww thanks! :D idk what else to say lol i'm flabbergasted >///

scarsluv December 24 2010, 00:55:34 UTC

this is beautiful and the ending was realistic too♥

jyotsu December 24 2010, 09:59:23 UTC

really? i didn't even see that lmao. thanks! :D

synnesai December 24 2010, 05:58:23 UTC

“It was you.” He whispered, and you felt like you just imploded.

oh god I imploded <3

You know, ever since their forming I seriously considered shipping them.

You sold it.

This was lovely and I enjoyed it thoroughly <3

jyotsu December 24 2010, 10:00:31 UTC

LOL glad to have converted you into this religion! >D thanks a lot for reading!