Yet Again (Part 2)...

[mike_w_caizza]

Well as most of you guessed, my day blew... 6 days b4 my b-day and there is sooooo much negativity here... I mean, the whole family didnt fight... It was more like, Family vs Noel...  Noel came in my room, sayin she was gonna run away and shit. I told her to shut the fuck up and do somethin right for a change... Meh.... Part of me feels bad for her

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[qweenie903]

Like I said in my other reply I finish the crits on the other poems, let me know if you want feedback on the new ones.

Your sister is still young too, give her some time, she might come around. My brother was like that too, now he's better. He never bought people gifts or anything, but now that he works and has money he buys my parents stuff for the holidays and thier birthdays.

Kool Beanz...

[mike_w_caizza]

Yea. I think havin some feedback would be great. Could help me with my writing tremendously. And if you have, post them on writing website you're on(if you think thats kool). Get some people to read them. I dunno, yea. When you get a chance, those crits would be kool. Thanx!!!