[23] The Duality of Seven [1/7]

Aug 22, 2010 08:09

Title: Envy and Kindness
Pairing: Arthur/Gwen, Gwen/Lancelot (implied)
Rating: T
Summary: Seven Vignettes of Arthur and Guinevere. Seven Heavenly Virtues. Seven Deadly Sins. Centers around the colors red and purple. Based on a combination of two prompts from thefuturequeen's Gwen summer battle 2010.
Spoilers: I'll just say for season 1 and 2 to be ( Read more... )

arthur/gwen, fanfiction, the duality of seven

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starry_laa August 22 2010, 12:49:20 UTC
Oh, that was a sweet vignette and I loved the observations made from Arthur.

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miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 12:56:13 UTC
Thanks! Sorry, I just noticed that the scene separations didn't show up. I've fixed it now, but I'm sorry if this was confusing.

*does face palm*

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starry_laa August 22 2010, 13:00:51 UTC
Oh, I hadn't noticed, lol :D

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miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 13:03:33 UTC
Yay! No worries then! Thanks for reading!

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sagacious_c August 22 2010, 14:33:18 UTC
Excellent job with all the conflicted emotions everyone is feeling! I loved Arthur being a jerk at the beginning. But why did he encourage Lancelot at the end? Was that part of his reborn feelings of camaraderie, or was he acknowledging that Gwen still cares for Lancelot and that he should know that before potentially dying in battle?

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miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 17:28:42 UTC
He does it out of kindness. He has faith in his relationship with Gwen that Lance is not as much of a threat. He knows what it's like to be in Lancelot's position [that's partially where the camaraderie comes from]. He doesn't know that Gwen's feelings haven't disappeared and that he could possibly be enabling Lance.

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sagacious_c August 22 2010, 19:45:41 UTC
I feel so obtuse -- that totally makes sense! The complexity continues... And so does the suspense!

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miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 20:08:55 UTC
Don't! I'm glad there seem to be many interpretations of this. It means I've done my job and I didn't screw up!

This is one snapshot of seven (which I may turn into an entire fic when I finish all the WIP I have). The others will be unrelated. This one will have a part two within the fic (either greed/charity or lust/chastity. I haven't decided).

I'm glad you liked it!

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saurina August 22 2010, 16:38:29 UTC
I loved how everybody's feelings was on edge, and I especially loved the last bit between Lancelot and Arthur. Now bring on the next chapter..;D

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miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 17:24:41 UTC
Thanks! I'll try to asap! I have a week left before hiatus so prepare for fics galore!

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saurina August 22 2010, 18:55:23 UTC
ha ha I will;)

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mydoctortennant August 22 2010, 17:46:48 UTC
Eeee <3
Prompt Monster this is awesome.
Silly Arthur is silly. I can not wait for the rest of them! =D

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miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 17:59:45 UTC
Thanks, bb! He is a silly, silly boy. But we all love him dearly regardless :D.

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mydoctortennant August 22 2010, 18:10:01 UTC
Always. I love him.

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javabreeze August 22 2010, 17:50:22 UTC
miki_hime1221 August 22 2010, 19:06:39 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

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