Girl power again!! You are killing me! And OMG an epic kiss of insane epicness- excuse me while I flail The sexual tension between those two is spot on, am loving it sooooooooo much. Lance- I wish I could feel sorry for him, but he is slimy and sneaky and has been messing with a/g Also loved the fact that at the end gwen was upset and did just fall into Arthur's waiting arms- good on you for that. This was brilliant AGAIN, I have no idea how but your writing continues to astound me. You handle all the complex situations with a maturity and sense of realism which is just amazing AND you stay faithful to the original characters while also putting your own spin on it. Can't wait for more :D
*blushes* I've been thinking of how to write that kiss for ages. I'm glad it had the desired effect.
Thank you so much for this. I was just about to start writing the next chapter (I'm soooo busy!) and seeing this reminds me why I'm writing in the first place. Thanks for the encouragement!
I know it must have been sooooo hard writing that because there was so much build up to it but it certainly didn't disappoint. There was soooooooooooooo much sexual tension between them and it would have been really easy for it to have been a let down- if you have seen the most recent adaptation of persuasion you will totally know what I mean- but yet again you exceeded all expectations. And no worries, when I enjoy reading something I feel the author deserves to know and why I have so much- thus the insanely long commentaries :P I hope you are good busy and am already looking forward to the next chapter :D
OH! I LOVE this story! I was crying and laughing and everything. Dang, Lance is such a jerk! I don't feel bad about the whole Merlin/Morgana because Morgana has Leon (which is absolutely adorable by the way) and Merlin has Freya. Merlin/Freya made me cry! I love their relationship. Oh, I don't want Freya to die :( And Mordred in the last chapter with the Crayola War! That was so clever! And his crush on Annie, too cute! You are totally brilliant! Thank you so much for putting this up. Please write more soon :)
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And OMG an epic kiss of insane epicness- excuse me while I flail
The sexual tension between those two is spot on, am loving it sooooooooo much.
Lance- I wish I could feel sorry for him, but he is slimy and sneaky and has been messing with a/g
Also loved the fact that at the end gwen was upset and did just fall into Arthur's waiting arms- good on you for that.
This was brilliant AGAIN, I have no idea how but your writing continues to astound me. You handle all the complex situations with a maturity and sense of realism which is just amazing AND you stay faithful to the original characters while also putting your own spin on it. Can't wait for more :D
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Thank you so much for this. I was just about to start writing the next chapter (I'm soooo busy!) and seeing this reminds me why I'm writing in the first place. Thanks for the encouragement!
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And no worries, when I enjoy reading something I feel the author deserves to know and why I have so much- thus the insanely long commentaries :P
I hope you are good busy and am already looking forward to the next chapter :D
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Heh heh. Yeah, I'm trying my best. You'll definitely get one at the very least. I can promise you that :)
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And Mordred in the last chapter with the Crayola War! That was so clever! And his crush on Annie, too cute!
You are totally brilliant! Thank you so much for putting this up. Please write more soon :)
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