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mikiya2200

If you could only see -- chapter 1/?

Jul 29, 2010 19:43

Characters: Sam, John, Dean, Bobby
Rating: PG-13 for language
Genre: Angst, AU
Word Count: ~6,500
Summary: A month before Sam could accept the free ride to Stanford he was cursed. That curse changed his life forever, he couldn't leave for college and was forced to stay with his family and continue hunting. But, if you ask him, that might ( Read more... )

spn if you could only see, fanfiction, spn john, spn unleashed, spn bobby, spn sam, supernatural, spn dean

Comments 15

borgmama1of5 July 29 2010, 23:02:23 UTC

Wow!

I wasn't expecting anything like this. Well-written, I feel John's conflict. Although I confiess to a desire to smack him...

You must keep going, it is cruel and unusual punishment outlawed by the Geneva Convention to just stop here.

mikiya2200 July 31 2010, 14:03:44 UTC

You know, this desire to smack John... sounds VERY familiar! ;) But, really, at least in this fic, he's only doing the best he can.

And... wow, I guess I need a lawyer, didn't know the Geneva Convention was keeping an eye on fanfiction! :D I think I have no other choice but to keep writing then. Hehe, that one had me chuckling all day, you know? ;)

Thanks a lot!

maggie33 July 30 2010, 08:29:00 UTC

I like it very much. It's a great mood-setting. And I'm dying to know what's next, so I hope you will write more. And soon. :)

mikiya2200 July 31 2010, 14:06:08 UTC

I'm very relieved that people seem to like this! It has already been decided (by my muses ;) ) that I will keep writing this and I'll be as fast as I can! Thank you!

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mikiya2200 July 31 2010, 14:10:15 UTC

Credits for including the quote go to Ghostfour, I haven't seen Being Human yet (since it isn't airing here in Germany) but I think I'm gonna go hunt for some episodes online, that show sounds very interesting. Big brother Dean will make an appearance very soon, he just won't keep quiet. I hope you like the next part, too!

pinkphoenix1985 July 31 2010, 13:13:44 UTC

This is brilliant! I can't wait to see how Dean is around werewolf Sam

mikiya2200 July 31 2010, 14:11:06 UTC

Well, to be honest, I can't wait to see Dean around him, too, I have a few ideas about that... Glad you like it!! :)

deej1957 August 15 2010, 20:23:20 UTC

Just now getting to this--awesome. Not really similar to the wonderful "Hunter of the Shadows" other than the werewolf. This is a completely different story.

very well put together and an excellent start to a series. I kind of like John in this (and considering my dislike of the man is pretty high, that's a compliment), but I'd really like to see how Dean is with WolfSam.

mikiya2200 August 16 2010, 13:12:19 UTC

See, that was what I didn't really get, this is so not like "Hunters" at all, completely different concept and still people were asking me all the time...

Anyway, thank you a lot, it's so much fun working on this story, I tend to be a really lazy writer most of the time but with this story I simply enjoy writing. And also, THANKS a lot for your "feelings" ;) for John, I love the guy to pieces, really do, and so this compliment really makes me SMILE!!!

Dean and WolfSam will be a big part in the future chapters, I promise! :)